AndrewJSchofield commented on code in PR #22286: URL: https://github.com/apache/kafka/pull/22286#discussion_r3247213238
########## docs/security/authentication-using-sasl.md: ########## @@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ Tokens can also be cancelled explicitly. If a token is not renewed by the token #### Creating Delegation Tokens -Tokens can be created by using Admin APIs or using `kafka-delegation-tokens.sh` script. Delegation token requests (create/renew/expire/describe) should be issued only on SASL or SSL authenticated channels. Tokens can not be requests if the initial authentication is done through delegation token. A token can be created by the user for that user or others as well by specifying the `--owner-principal` parameter. Owner/Renewers can renew or expire tokens. Owner/renewers can always describe their own tokens. To describe other tokens, a DESCRIBE_TOKEN permission needs to be added on the User resource representing the owner of the token. `kafka-delegation-tokens.sh` script examples are given below. +Tokens can be created by using Admin APIs or using `kafka-delegation-tokens.sh` script. Delegation token requests (create/renew/expire/describe) should be issued only on SASL or SSL authenticated channels. Tokens cannot be requested if the initial authentication is done through delegation token. A token can be created by the user for that user or others as well by specifying the `--owner-principal` parameter. Owner/Renewers can renew or expire tokens. Owner/renewers can always describe their own tokens. To describe other tokens, a DESCRIBE_TOKEN permission needs to be added on the User resource representing the owner of the token. `kafka-delegation-tokens.sh` script examples are given below. Review Comment: nit: "Owner/Renewers" should be "Owners/renewers". -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected]
