Hello Musabagudu, I believe you are a commando, therefore I think frank talk would do no harm. No one likes unsolicited email, but we know that it's always welcome if it's from "one of us".
Being said, you could do better by : (1) Changing the subject of your email (the subject on your email is a very sensitive one) (2) Signing your email at the end; you know like Full Name, Year of graduation, School house (at least one of the three would do for a start) (3) Starting your email with an opening , as in, "Good day all; Hi fellow commandoes; Hello all". You know, something that will invite your readers to be interested. (4) And finally, to make things brief, a little politesse in your content would do. For example, instead of starting with: "pls just like the painting..." you could use words like "Please kindly like my painting....". I actually hope you take this in good faith. It is not a criticism. You need to progress in your work and this seemingly little faux pas, might make a big difference. NB: I have liked your painting, even though I don't have the faintest idea of art appreciation in general, and I believe others would do the same... for a fellow commando. "A Ship in the harbour is safe....but that's not where ships are meant for.... They are meant for the rough, high sea," "With God, all things are possible" ________________________________ From: "[email protected]" <[email protected]> To: [email protected] Sent: Monday, August 5, 2013 12:12 AM Subject: Re: [Jos Commandos] Update Folashade Kidney Transplant Support . pls just like the painting on dis link to help me qualify for the next round on international art Expo https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=329649230503267&set=pb.100516846749841.-2207520000.1375385774.&type=3&theater#. Jst "LIKE" the painting tks ans God bless Sent from my BlackBerry® smartphone from Etisalat. Enjoy high speed mobile broadband on any of our Easyblaze plans. Visit www.etisalat.com.ng for details. ________________________________ From: Kester Buzugbe <[email protected]> Sender: [email protected] Date: Thu, 11 Jul 2013 07:08:58 -0700 (PDT) To: [email protected]<[email protected]> ReplyTo: [email protected] Subject: Re: [Jos Commandos] Update Folashade Kidney Transplant Support Thank You very much. Noted. From: COJOSA - Lagos <[email protected]> To: [email protected] Sent: Thursday, 11 July 2013, 15:04 Subject: Re: [Jos Commandos] Update Folashade Kidney Transplant Support Dear Sir, For anonymous deposit you can credit the account with the name "CSSJ - Folashade" and it will be recorded as such. God Bless us all. Cojosa - Lagos COJOSA - Lagos From: [email protected] Sender: [email protected] Date: Thu, 11 Jul 2013 13:53:49 To: <[email protected]>; <[email protected]> ReplyTo: [email protected] Subject: Re: [Jos Commandos] Update Folashade Kidney Transplant Support I beg make una never vex for me. I will do the needful but please I will like to keep my own personal. No matter what I give Senior Shade in my estimation will never be a enough. I hope my request will be respected. Sent from my BlackBerry 10 smartphone. From: Cojosa Lagos Sent: Thursday, July 11, 2013 14:39 PM To: [email protected] Reply To: [email protected] Subject: [Jos Commandos] Update Folashade Kidney Transplant Support Great Commandos, Please find below the contributions made so far: S/N Date Depositor Amount Balance 1 Amount B/F 5,267.50 5,267.50 2 3-Jul-13 Micahael Agana 40,000.00 45,267.50 3 5-Jul-13 Awodu Monsurat 5,000.00 50,267.50 4 5-Jul-13 Mateen Sadiq 5,000.00 55,267.50 5 5-Jul-13 Sadique Olushina 5,000.00 60,267.50 6 5-Jul-13 Transf Neft Elegbede 10,000.00 70,267.50 7 9-Jul-13 Command Folashade 20,000.00 90,267.50 8 11-Jul-13 Transf Com Sec 30,000.00 120,267.50 For those that wish to make contributions kindly make payment to the account below. God bless you as you give to save a life. Cojosa - Lagos From:[email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, July 11, 2013 1:11 PM To: [email protected] Subject: FirstBank Alert On Your Account [CREDIT] HelloCOMMAND SECONDARY SCHOOL JOS ALUMNI ASSOCIATION, This is a transaction notification on your account. TRANSACTION DETAILS Account Number: 2018929850 Amount: N30,000.00 CR Transaction Narrative: FIP:UBN/COMMAND SECONDARY /ONLINE TRF IF Transaction Date: 11-Jul-13 13:09 PM Cleared Balance: N120,267.50 CR Uncleared Balance: N0.00 CR Thank you for banking with FirstBank This is an auto-generated mail. Please do not reply. For enquiries on FirstBank products and services, please call 0700FIRSTCONTACT (0700-34778-2668228), 01-4485500, 0708-062-5000 or email: [email protected]
