Here are a set of comments on the latest draft. 1. Introduction - The first paragraph should not focus so much on the compact serialization given that both serializations are merged into this document. I would suggest a paragraph on the encryption portion of the problem followed by a paragraph on the two serialization formats used with their purposes
2. After the movement on the CBC_HMAC algorithm, I am not sure that section 3.2 is providing sufficient value for it to be present. Given that the full details on it are in an appendix you should consider its removal from here. You might move a comment on looking in appendix a for completed examples into section 3 from here 3. In section 4.1.3 - I would suggest changing the text to "This parameter MUST be omitted unless required by the algorithm in the "alg" member. This header parameter MUST be understood if an algorithm is supported that requires it." I have skipped over a number of sections that I knew would be affected by the outcomes of the interim meeting. Jim _______________________________________________ jose mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/jose
