#134: Section 4.1 A. Suggested replacement text for the last sentence of the first paragraph
Two types of algorithms are specified in this section. The first are those that deal with the CEK value, either encrypting it (using a symmetric or asymmetric key) or producing it directly from a shared secret (using either a shared value or asymmetric key). B. Don't need the entire spiel in the description of the management algorithm - that goes in the section below. Just the highlights. I would be comfortable with just using the abbreviations here since it is a table and not use the full names. C. delete paragraph on short identifiers (moves to intro) D. If the second paragraph following the table is kept, then it should be more detailed on what the concepts are and what they mean. Possibly with multiple paragraphs. -- -------------------------+------------------------------------------------- Reporter: | Owner: draft-ietf-jose-json-web- [email protected] | [email protected] Type: defect | Status: new Priority: major | Milestone: Component: json-web- | Version: algorithms | Keywords: Severity: - | -------------------------+------------------------------------------------- Ticket URL: <https://grenache.tools.ietf.org/wg/jose/trac/ticket/134> jose <http://tools.ietf.org/jose/> _______________________________________________ jose mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/jose
