#138: Section 4.7 ECDH-ES A. 1st paragraph s/using the/combined with the/
B. It is not clear what the two bullet points are stating here. My first reaction was that you needed to talk about these in different subsections and then I found them - should probably forward reference. C. I don't know that the paragraph starting "The alg header parameter" is useful. Seems that this should be in the subsections. D. The paragraph on Direct Key Agreement should and Concat should be in the subsection. E. s/agreement transaction/agreement operation/ or for each message sent. -- -------------------------+------------------------------------------------- Reporter: | Owner: draft-ietf-jose-json-web- [email protected] | [email protected] Type: defect | Status: new Priority: Editorial | Milestone: Component: json-web- | Version: algorithms | Keywords: Severity: - | -------------------------+------------------------------------------------- Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/jose/trac/ticket/138> jose <http://tools.ietf.org/jose/> _______________________________________________ jose mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/jose
