#124: Section 1 - Introduction

 A. s/enumerates/registers/

 B.  You have gotten a long way into things before JSON is expanded.  Needs
 to be done earlier.

 C.  It is not clear what 'them' refers to in the first sentence of para 2.
 s/for them in this specification/here/

 D.  Add: Allows updates to the core specs without changing this document

 E.  Say what registries are being defined in the document

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 Reporter:               |      Owner:  draft-ietf-jose-json-web-
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     Type:  defect       |     Status:  new
 Priority:  Editorial    |  Milestone:
Component:  json-web-    |    Version:
  algorithms             |   Keywords:
 Severity:  -            |
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Ticket URL: <https://grenache.tools.ietf.org/wg/jose/trac/ticket/124>
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