No issues identified on the other two documents.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Mike Jones [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: Friday, February 21, 2014 1:04 PM
> To: Jim Schaad
> Cc: [email protected]
> Subject: RE: [jose] Chair Review of Draft-ietf-jose-json-web-signature
> 
> Is there any related feedback on JWE or JWK or are you done with your
chair
> review of them and no issues were identified?
> 
>                               Thanks,
>                               -- Mike
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: jose [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Jim Schaad
> Sent: Friday, February 21, 2014 10:30 AM
> To: [email protected]
> Cc: [email protected]
> Subject: [jose] Chair Review of Draft-ietf-jose-json-web-signature
> 
> This is a review of the documents from a process point of view.  All items
> here MUST be fixed prior to the document progressing.
> 
> 
> 1.  Using lowercase 'not' together with uppercase 'MUST', 'SHALL',
'SHOULD',
>      or 'RECOMMENDED' is not an accepted usage according to RFC 2119.
> Please
>      use uppercase 'NOT' together with RFC 2119 keywords (if that is what
you
>      mean).
> 
>      The "crit" (critical) Header Parameter indicates that extensions to
>      the initial RFC versions of [[ this specification ]] and [JWA] are
being
>      used that MUST be understood and processed.  Its value is an array
>      listing the Header Parameter names present in the JWS Header that use
>      those extensions.  If any of the listed extension Header Parameters
are
>      not understood and supported by the receiver, it MUST reject the JWS.
>      Senders must not include Header Parameter names defined by the
initial
>      RFC versions of [[ this specification ]] or [JWA] for use with JWS,
>      duplicate names, or names that do not occur as Header Parameter names
>      within the JWS Header in the "crit" list. Senders MUST not use the
empty
>      list "[]" as the "crit" value. Recipients MAY reject the JWS if the
>      critical list contains any Header Parameter names defined by the
initial
>      RFC versions of [[ this specification ]] or [JWA] for use with JWS,
or
>      any other constraints on its use are violated.  This Header Parameter
>      MUST be integrity protected, and therefore MUST occur only within the
> JWS
>      Protected Header, when used.  Use of this Header Parameter is
> OPTIONAL.
> 
>      This Header Parameter MUST be understood and processed by
> implementations.
> 
> 
> 2.  Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2246 (Obsoleted by RFC 4346)
> 
>       If there is a reason to reference TLS 1.0 rather than the current
> version of TLS, then there needs to be explicit justification made as to
why
> this is the case.
> 
> 
> 
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