Thanks for your review, Richard.  I'm repeating my previous responses from my 
Thursday reply, but this time using ">" quoting rather than colors, for better 
readability by people not using HTML-enabled mail readers...

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> DISCUSS:
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> Overall, this document is in much more solid shape than when it began.
> Thanks to the WG for a lot of hard work.  I only have two remaining concerns,
> which should hopefully be easy to address.
> 
> Section 7.2.
> I've had several implementors trying to use JWS in the JSON serialization ask 
> why
> it was necessary to include a "signatures" array in cases where there's only 
> one
> signer.  It seems like this is going to be a major barrier to deployment and 
> re-
> use, so I would propose including the following text:
> 
> """
> In cases where the JWS has been signed by only a single signer, the 
> "signatures"
> array will contain a single object.  In such cases, the elements of the single
> "signatures" object MAY be included at the top level of the JWS object.  A 
> JSON-
> formatted JWS that contains a "signatures" field MUST NOT contain a
> "protected", "header", or "signature" field, and vice versa.
> """
> 
> This may also require some other changes where "signatures" is relied on, 
> e.g.,
> in Section 9 of the JWE spec.

This was previously proposed (I believe during the Denver interim meeting) and 
rejected by the working group because it complicates both producers and parsers 
by introducing an unnecessary special case.  Currently, by design, whether 
there are single or multiple signatures, the same syntax is used.  Your 
proposal would use a different syntax in the single signature case than in the 
multiple signature case.  This is likely to result in implementation bugs and 
inconsistencies.

> Section 6.
> """
> These Header Parameters MUST be integrity protected if the information that
> they convey is to be utilized in a trust decision.
> """
> This smells really fishy to me.  What's your attack scenario?  I'm pretty 
> certain
> that there's no way any of these fields can be altered in such a way that (1) 
> the
> signature will validate, and (2) the recipient will accept a key it 
> shouldn't.  By way
> of contrast, CMS doesn't sign the certificate fields, and the Certificate 
> payload in
> TLS is only signed as a side effect of the protocol's verification that the 
> remote
> end has been the same through the whole handshake (which doesn't apply here).

The attack scenario is trivial to describe.  If an attacker can change 
information used in a trust decision, the trust decision has no validity.  
Unless the information is integrity-protected, the attacker could change the 
non-integrity-protected portions of the JWS in an undetectable way.

For what it's worth, Sean had us add language in a number of places that 
basically said that information is only as trustworthy as its source and the 
means by which it is obtained.  If I remember correctly, this was one of those 
places.

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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Section 2.
> In the definition of "Unsecured JWS", it would be good to note that this 
> requires
> "alg" == "none".

OK

> Section 3.3.
> Why doesn't this section have a JSON-encoded form as well?

Because it's meant to be a simple introductory example to help people get their 
head around the concept - not a complete tutorial.  Other examples of 
JSON-encoded objects are found elsewhere in the document and lots of them are 
found in draft-ietf-jose-cookbook.

> Appendix A.5.
> I would prefer if this example could be removed.  JWT is the only use case for
> Unsecured JWS right now, and there's already an example in that document.

Mike> Given that it's important that implementers using them understand 
Unsecured JWSs, there is motivation to retain the example.  I'd be interested 
in what others in the working group think, given that there was substantial 
support for retaining this functionality when its removal was proposed.

> Thanks for Appendix C.  FWIW, it has been implemented:
> http://dxr.mozilla.org/mozilla-central/source/dom/crypto/CryptoBuffer.cpp#85

You're welcome.

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                                Thanks again!
                                -- Mike

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