-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA512 On 12/15/14, 6:33 PM, Alissa Cooper wrote: > Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-jose-cookbook-07: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to > all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to > cut this introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more > information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found > here: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-jose-cookbook/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I would suggest using a simpler word than "progenitor" in 3.2 and > 3.4 (unless it's a term of art, but it doesn't seem like it is). > >
Richard suggested "private key corresponding to", which I think matches existing terms best. For consistency, I'm also replacing "corollary of" with "public key corresponding to" in 3.1 and 3.3. - -- - - m&m Matt Miller < [email protected] > Cisco Systems, Inc. -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG/MacGPG2 v2.0.22 (Darwin) Comment: GPGTools - https://gpgtools.org iQEcBAEBCgAGBQJUkcN0AAoJEDWi+S0W7cO11xkH/A4UijqGRvEun2B7J273C0em qRW7buT2bMbACcAltDarwMZI07qGnWrp6dHCMAa41zFZlbIhRmXS94BteAZjDmAt 3+/OU2cxA/nE+zEBD2ffGSMRVQodRH/mIZ6/HwXjmqJ/fwoAe/CzmifRkD88d8aL EsbnQUZzGfvBZ1G40LV+B2fXbGUhHdz/cZafSXrwK2IVAf37KRYMcIGtLz+XKrhg vXB2tBRRPDgYGoePBOF7c/qR21bUX55+DEcWNiCjD3valk2SD2YNRc30rV+mCZR0 Ba4v/L6IF+oeBXQG+jbxd8m4l8XitUvcB1wfJWcqCEYOhXgi2mJMhsJA3SMWaSo= =7N/b -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- _______________________________________________ jose mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/jose
