Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-jose-cookbook-07: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-jose-cookbook/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The authors engaged in the discussion with the OPS-DIR reviewer Jouni on the points below. Thanks Few minor nits & comments: o IDnits spits out warnings. I recon all of them are of kind that will be corrected by t he RFC Editor -> no worries. o The document uses example domains "hobbiton.example" and alike. According to RFC2606 & 6761 the example domains are "example.com" etc. These should be corrected UNLESS they cause too much trouble regenerating outputs into examples... o line 325 "coordiates" should probably be "coordinates". o I would take acronyms (e.g. "(JWS)") away from the abstract. _______________________________________________ jose mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/jose
