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Looks really good, just a few grammar nits. You might have convinced me to use something better than LibreOffice + Zotero. ;-) doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33121> Don't these two paragraphs basically say the same thing? :-) doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33122> Please stick with one tense here at the end. (e.g. either "completion, compilation" or "completing, compiling") It reads awkwardly when you mix the two. doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33123> editors -> editor doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33124> Enter preamble -> Enter a preamble doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33125> Choose entry encoding -> Choose an entry encoding doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33126> missing a "using" between the description and the first <menuchoice> like the others in the list doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33127> window looking similar -> window that looks similar doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33128> choose -> choose the doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33129> from &kbibtex; menu -> from the &kbibtex; menu doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33130> for the referencing of the bibliography entry -> for referencing the bibliography entry doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33131> Using of the -> Using the doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33132> ABC order -> alphabetic order doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33133> maybe explain what are entry labels? (complete LaTeX noob here :-) doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33134> &latex; editor capabilities -> &latex; editor's capabilities doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33135> see the results, &DVI; -> see the results as a &DVI; doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33136> using <menuchoice> -> using the <menuchoice> doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33137> using <link -> using the <link doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33149> current selected -> currently selected Since there are a few of these, I guess I should mention, this is only wrong in the few areas I point out because you need the "-ly" when "current" describes a verb, as in "currently selected" or when it describes another adjective, as in "currently active". Many of the "current"s in this doc describe a noun, like "current bibliography", which is correct. (Ugh, English. :-p) doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33139> is lowercasing -> will lowercase doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33140> perform search -> perform a search doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33148> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33141> perform search -> perform a search doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33142> visit database homepage -> visit the database homepage doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33150> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33151> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33152> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33153> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33146> the toolbars customization -> customizing the toolbars doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33147> creates new -> creates a new doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33154> current active -> currently active doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33155> current active -> currently active doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33156> current open -> currently open doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33157> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33158> in the large -> in large doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33159> current opened -> currently opened doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33160> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33161> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33162> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33163> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33164> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33165> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33166> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33167> via Preferences dialog -> via the Preferences dialog doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33168> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33169> Color labels is -> Color labels are doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33170> current selected -> currently selected doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33171> identifiers suggestion schemes -> identifier suggestion schemes doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33172> make &kbibtex; to show -> make &kbibtex; show doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33173> click on -> click on the doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33174> Click on Apply button -> Click on the Apply button doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33175> on -> on the doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33176> use <guimenuitem -> use the <guimenuitem doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33177> from &lyx; main menu -> from the &lyx; main menu doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33178> there you want -> where you want doc/index.docbook <https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/#comment33179> use a package manager -> use the package manager - T.C. Hollingsworth On Dec. 30, 2013, 6:01 p.m., Yuri Chornoivan wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Dec. 30, 2013, 6:01 p.m.) > > > Review request for Documentation and Thomas Fischer. > > > Repository: kbibtex > > > Description > ------- > > A brief documentation including man page (converted from previous > untranslatable version). > > > Diffs > ----- > > doc/new-document.png PRE-CREATION > doc/online-search.png PRE-CREATION > doc/reference-preview.png PRE-CREATION > doc/search-results.png PRE-CREATION > doc/statistics.png PRE-CREATION > doc/svn-update.png PRE-CREATION > doc/tools-check-spelling.png PRE-CREATION > doc/view-filter.png PRE-CREATION > man/CMakeLists.txt 3c5b808 > man/kbibtex.1 ce67b21 > doc/list-remove.png PRE-CREATION > doc/lyx-preferences.png PRE-CREATION > doc/main-toolbar.png PRE-CREATION > doc/man-kbibtex.1.docbook PRE-CREATION > doc/media-playback-start.png PRE-CREATION > doc/CMakeLists.txt PRE-CREATION > doc/add-macro-source.png PRE-CREATION > doc/add-macro.png PRE-CREATION > doc/application-pdf.png PRE-CREATION > doc/applications-internet.png PRE-CREATION > doc/code-context.png PRE-CREATION > doc/config-color.png PRE-CREATION > doc/config-general.png PRE-CREATION > doc/config-id-suggestions.png PRE-CREATION > doc/config-keywords.png PRE-CREATION > doc/config-pdf.png PRE-CREATION > doc/config-saving.png PRE-CREATION > doc/config-user-interface.png PRE-CREATION > doc/configure.png PRE-CREATION > doc/cross-ref.png PRE-CREATION > doc/document-open-remote.png PRE-CREATION > doc/document-open.png PRE-CREATION > doc/document-preview.png PRE-CREATION > doc/document-revert.png PRE-CREATION > doc/document-save.png PRE-CREATION > doc/draw-text.png PRE-CREATION > doc/edit-clear-locationbar-rtl.png PRE-CREATION > doc/edit-element.png PRE-CREATION > doc/edit-undo.png PRE-CREATION > doc/element-editor.png PRE-CREATION > doc/external-tab.png PRE-CREATION > doc/favorites.png PRE-CREATION > doc/file-settings.png PRE-CREATION > doc/filter-toolbar.png PRE-CREATION > doc/find-pdf.png PRE-CREATION > doc/first-run.png PRE-CREATION > doc/flag.png PRE-CREATION > doc/go-down.png PRE-CREATION > doc/go-up.png PRE-CREATION > doc/index.docbook PRE-CREATION > doc/list-add.png PRE-CREATION > doc/list-of-documents.png PRE-CREATION > doc/list-of-values.png PRE-CREATION > CMakeLists.txt 194ba74 > > Diff: https://git.reviewboard.kde.org/r/114742/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > EBN, checkXML, compilation, installation. Thomas Fischer did not object to > the general concept of the manual when discussing it via email. > > PDF version to ease up reviewing is available here: > > https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/55247264/kbibtex.pdf > > > Thanks, > > Yuri Chornoivan > > -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <http://mail.kde.org/pipermail/kde-doc-english/attachments/20131230/269e0fdb/attachment-0001.html>
