davidc added a comment.

  Thanks for the update, and for tightening some of the language. The only nag 
I have is with the last sentence in the first paragraph.
  
  Seeing Plasma described as "friendly" seems a bit like fluff and is an 
awkward choice of words for a user interface. I know you were probably going 
for "user-friendly" and that it would be a bit cumbersome when added to the 
sentence, but I think it might be best just to strike "friendly and powerful" 
entirely, since the sentence runs on a bit as it is.

REPOSITORY
  R263 KXmlGui

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D16395

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