Please find attached a patch for kde/trunk/www/sites/windows/index.php
which I feel improves the wording of the homepage. It also correctly
escapes an ampersand.
Please let me know what you think.
Jack
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Index: index.php
===================================================================
--- index.php (revision 1214828)
+++ index.php (working copy)
@@ -3,20 +3,20 @@
include ( "header.inc" );
?>
-<p>The KDE on Windows Initiative is an ongoing progress in native porting of the KDE applications to MS Windows.
-Currently the Windows versions starting with Windows XP are supported.</p>
+<p>The KDE on Windows Initiative is an ongoing project to port the KDE applications to MS Windows.
+Currently supported versions of Windows are XP, Vista and 7.</p>
-<p>The preferred way of installing KDE apps under Windows is the <strong>KDE-Installer</strong>.
-See <a href="download.php">Download Information</a> for more information.</p>
-<p><strong>KDE on Windows is not in the final state, so applications can be unsuitable for day to day use yet.</strong> </p>
-<p>To get an overview of this project you should enter <a href="http://techbase.kde.org/Projects/KDE_on_Windows";>
+<p>The preferred method for installing KDE applications under Windows is the <strong>KDE-Installer</strong>.
+See <a href="download.php">Download Information</a> for more details.</p>
+<p><strong>KDE on Windows is not yet in a final state, so some applications may be unsuitable for everyday use.</strong> </p>
+<p>To get an overview of this project you should read <a href="http://techbase.kde.org/Projects/KDE_on_Windows";>
the main KDE TechBase section</a>.</p>
-<p>For some help from the project members you may get in contact with the
-<a href="http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=kde-windows&uio=MTE9MTk117";>instant WebChat client</a>
+<p>For support from project members you may get in contact via the
+<a href="http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=kde-windows&uio=MTE9MTk117";>instant WebChat client</a>
or by joining the <a href="irc://irc.freenode.net/kde-windows">#kde-windows</a> IRC channel on freenode.
-Before contacting project members directly please take a look into the
+Before contacting project members directly please take a look at the
<a href="http://techbase.kde.org/Projects/KDE_on_Windows";>Project Overview</a>.
-Your question may be answered already there. </p>
+Your question may already be answered there. </p>
<p>You can join our mailing list <a href="http://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-windows";>kde-windows(@)kde.org</a>
for news and announcements.<br /></p>
<p>If you're interested in helping to track some issues, and get some of your favourite KDE apps working correctly,
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