Review: Needs Fixing I've just a couple of in-line comments regarding some grammar and formatting.
Diff comments: > diff --git a/testcases/image/1731_Netinstall (arm64 server live) > b/testcases/image/1731_Netinstall (arm64 server live) > new file mode 100644 > index 0000000..b6dcacc > --- /dev/null > +++ b/testcases/image/1731_Netinstall (arm64 server live) > @@ -0,0 +1,34 @@ > +This testcase is to run netboot installation on arm64 machines. You need an > installed Ubuntu machine in same network. "in the same" > + > +<em>Proceed in your native language if you wish. Instructions will remain in > English.</em> > + > +<release> is the current developing codename. <host> is the IP address of > installed Ubuntu machine. "current development codename". I also think putting a carriage return before <host> will make that easier to find when scanning the text. > +On your installed Ubuntu machine. > + > +<dl> > + <dt>sudo apt install -y tftpd-hpa apache2</dt> > + <dt>sudo curl > http://cdimage.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-server/daily-live/current/<release>-live-server-arm64.iso > -o /var/www/html/test-live-server-arm64.iso</dt> > + <dt>sudo mkdir /var/lib/tftpboot/grub /var/lib/tftpboot/casper</dt> > + <dt>sudo mount -o loop,ro /var/www/html/test-live-server-arm64.iso > /mnt</dt> > + <dt>sudo cp /mnt/casper/initrd /var/lib/tftpboot/casper</dt> > + <dt>sudo cp /mnt/casper/vmlinuz /var/lib/tftpboot/casper</dt> > + <dt>sudo curl > http://ports.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-ports/dists/<release>/main/uefi/grub2-arm64/current/grubnetaa64.efi.signed > -o /var/lib/tftpboot/grubnetaa64.efi.signed</dt> > + <dt>echo "menuentry \"Netboot from Ubuntu Live image\" {" | sudo tee > /var/lib/tftpboot/grub/grub.cfg</dt> > + <dt>echo " set gfxpayload=keep | sudo tee -a > /var/lib/tftpboot/grub/grub.cfg</dt> > + <dt>echo " linux /casper/vmlinuz > url=http://<host>/test-live-server-arm64.iso only-ubiquity ip=dhcp ---" | > sudo tee -a /var/lib/tftpboot/grub/grub.cfg</dt> > + <dt>echo " initrd /casper/initrd" | sudo tee -a > /var/lib/tftpboot/grub/grub.cfg</dt> > + <dt>echo "}" | sudo tee -a /var/lib/tftpboot/grub/grub.cfg</dt> > +</dl> > + > +Reconfigure the dhcp server for grubnetaa64.efi.signed as filename and > next-server as installed Ubuntu machine. e.g. > + > +host testbed { > + hardware ethernet 00:00:00:11:22:33; > + next-server 192.168.10.1; > + filename "grubnetaa64.efi.signed"; > +} > + > +Power on your arm64 machine and boot from ethernet. Connect to console > output and you shall see grub menu. Press ENTER to load kernel and finish the > installation. > + > +<strong>If you finish the installation, please <a > href="results#add_result">submit</a> a 'passed' result. > + If any action fails, or produces an unexpected result, please <a > href="results#add_result">submit</a> a 'failed' result and <a > href="../../buginstructions">file a bug</a>. Please be sure to include the > bug number when you <a href="results#add_result">submit</a> your > result.</strong> -- https://code.launchpad.net/~ikepanhc/ubuntu-manual-tests/+git/ubuntu-manual-tests/+merge/395678 Your team Ubuntu Testcase Admins is subscribed to branch ubuntu-manual-tests:master. -- Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~kubuntu-council Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~kubuntu-council More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
