Hi, Here are my comments on this I-D. It looks good and ready. There are some small nits...
Adrian === Some acronyms should be expanded the first time they are used. It is not necessary to have a formal definition, just include the full term in the text when it is first used. TE CE PPVPN TDM L2 C GMPLS UNI E-NNI Section 4.2.1 second bullet s/layer 1l/layer 1/ Section 4.3.2 s/providing a long haul/providing long-haul/ Section 4.3.5 s/at a planned in the future/at a planned time in the future/ Section 4.3.5 This is the first use of "L1 connection" Section 4.3.5 s/according to schedule./according to a schedule./ Section 4.3.6 s/different L1VPN service provider./different L1VPN service providers./ Section 7.3 and 7.3.2 Suggest removing the reference to [GVPN] Section 8 s/related to which/related to what/ Section 15 Suggest removing [GVPN] [P&R Term] is now RFC 4427 _______________________________________________ L1vpn mailing list L1vpn@lists.ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/l1vpn
