Revision: 8812
          
http://languagetool.svn.sourceforge.net/languagetool/?rev=8812&view=rev
Author:   dnaber
Date:     2013-01-03 11:37:31 +0000 (Thu, 03 Jan 2013)
Log Message:
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[en] re-word the short message for "bad style"

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/JLanguageTool/src/main/resources/org/languagetool/rules/en/grammar.xml

Modified: 
trunk/JLanguageTool/src/main/resources/org/languagetool/rules/en/grammar.xml
===================================================================
--- 
trunk/JLanguageTool/src/main/resources/org/languagetool/rules/en/grammar.xml    
    2013-01-03 10:52:11 UTC (rev 8811)
+++ 
trunk/JLanguageTool/src/main/resources/org/languagetool/rules/en/grammar.xml    
    2013-01-03 11:37:31 UTC (rev 8812)
@@ -10311,7 +10311,7 @@
                 <token>and</token>
             </pattern>
             <message>"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but 
"<suggestion>try to</suggestion>" is recommended for writing.</message>
-            <short>Bad style</short>
+            <short>Possibly bad style</short>
             <example correction="try to" type="incorrect">She is going to 
<marker>try and</marker> go to the store.</example>
             <example type="correct">She is going to try to go to the 
store.</example>
         </rule>
@@ -11078,7 +11078,7 @@
                 <token postag="NN|NN:.*" postag_regexp="yes" 
regexp="yes">.{2,}<exception 
regexp="yes">today|yesterday|tomorrow|now|in|are</exception><exception 
postag="VBG|VB|VBP|VBD|VBN|RB|MD|IN|JJ.*|CC" 
postag_regexp="yes"></exception></token>
             </pattern>
             <message>You used three nouns after one another, and this might 
decrease readability. You might consider rewording the sentence.</message>
-            <short>Bad style</short>
+            <short>Possibly bad style</short>
             <example type="incorrect">The <marker>security protection 
software</marker> we offer is the state-of-the art achievement.</example>
             <example type="correct">The security software we offer is the 
state-of-the art achievement.</example>
         </rule>

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