Author: lou
Date: 2007-09-26 02:38:21 -0700 (Wed, 26 Sep 2007)
New Revision: 6608

Modified:
   openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/animation.dbk
   openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/constraints.dbk
   openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/fonts.dbk
   openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/programs/text-$6.lzx
   openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/proxied.dbk
Log:
Change 20070921-lou-l9Z4aa by [EMAIL PROTECTED] on 2007-09-21 14:17:20 AST
    in /home/lou/src/svn/openlaszlo/trunk
    for http://svn.openlaszlo.org/openlaszlo/trunk

Summary: correct minor doc issues

New Features:

Bugs Fixed: LPP-4762, fix minor issues (mostly typos) reported by user

Technical Reviewer: Ben Shine
QA Reviewer: (pending)
Doc Reviewer: John Sundman

Documentation:

Release Notes:

Details:
    

Tests:



Modified: openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/animation.dbk
===================================================================
--- openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/animation.dbk  2007-09-26 08:55:39 UTC 
(rev 6607)
+++ openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/animation.dbk  2007-09-26 09:38:21 UTC 
(rev 6608)
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
 
 <para>The <indexterm><primary>indirect</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="attribute">indirect</sgmltag> attribute allows you to reverse
 the direction in which an animation occurs while still arriving at the
-same result.  In the example below, setting the
+same result.  In the example below, the
 <indexterm><primary>indirect</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="attribute">indirect</sgmltag> attribute is set to <literal>true</literal>
 for the animation on <varname>B23</varname>.  This causes the
 animation to go to the left, rather than the right, disappearing off

Modified: openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/constraints.dbk
===================================================================
--- openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/constraints.dbk        2007-09-26 
08:55:39 UTC (rev 6607)
+++ openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/constraints.dbk        2007-09-26 
09:38:21 UTC (rev 6608)
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@
 
 <para>
 How does it work?  When you drag
-the red view to change its on y position, it sends an <indexterm><primary>ony 
event</primary></indexterm><literal>ony</literal> event.  The blue view is 
listening for the
+the red view to change its own y position, it sends an <indexterm><primary>ony 
event</primary></indexterm><literal>ony</literal> event.  The blue view is 
listening for the
 red view's <indexterm><primary>ony 
event</primary></indexterm><literal>ony</literal> event and responds by 
updating its own y position.  The red view is listening
 for the blue view's <indexterm><primary>ony 
event</primary></indexterm><literal>ony</literal> event; however, it doesn't 
respond to that event because an event handler only gets 
 called one time on each event.</para>
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@
 </programlisting>
 <para>
 in which the value of a parameter is constrained to that returned by a 
serializing function. 
-Upon inspection, we see that he dependencies of </para>
+Upon inspection, we see that the dependencies of </para>
 
 <programlisting>
      value="escape(canvas.options.serialize())"

Modified: openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/fonts.dbk
===================================================================
--- openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/fonts.dbk      2007-09-26 08:55:39 UTC 
(rev 6607)
+++ openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/fonts.dbk      2007-09-26 09:38:21 UTC 
(rev 6608)
@@ -259,9 +259,9 @@
 
     <para/></section><section><title>Syntax</title>
 <para>
-There are two ways to identify which font your application, or any element of 
it, should to use: the <indexterm><primary>font</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="attribute">font</sgmltag> attribute on 
<indexterm><primary>view</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="element">&lt;view&gt;</sgmltag><remark role="fixme">[unknown 
tag]</remark>
+There are two ways to identify which font your application, or any element of 
it, should use: the <indexterm><primary>font</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="attribute">font</sgmltag> attribute on 
<indexterm><primary>view</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="element">&lt;view&gt;</sgmltag><remark role="fixme">[unknown 
tag]</remark>
 <!--unknown tag: view-->
-s and classes derived from views, ant the 
<indexterm><primary>font</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="element">&lt;font&gt;</sgmltag>.
+s and classes derived from views, and the 
<indexterm><primary>font</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="element">&lt;font&gt;</sgmltag>.
 </para>
 <para/><section><title>The "font" attribute in opening tags</title>
 <para>
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@
 </para>
 <para/></section><section><title>Comparison to CSS</title>
 <para>
- The OpenLaszlo <indexterm><primary>font</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="attribute">font</sgmltag> attribute is similar to the CSS 'font' and 
'font-family' properties: 
http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/CR-CSS21-20040225/fonts.html#font-family-prop. 
+ The OpenLaszlo <indexterm><primary>font</primary></indexterm><sgmltag 
class="attribute">font</sgmltag> attribute is similar to the CSS 'font' and 
'font-family' properties: <ulink 
url="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/CR-CSS21-20040225/fonts.html#font-family-prop";>here</ulink>.
 
 The remaining differences are:
 </para>
 <itemizedlist spacing="compact"><listitem><para>LZX specifies the font as an 
XML attribute.    HTML+CSS specifies it is a CSS 
property.</para></listitem><listitem><para>An OpenLaszlo 'font' can only be a 
list of font names. This makes it more similar to the CSS 'font-family' than to 
the CSS 'font', which is a shorthand property that can also accept font size, 
style, variant, weight, and line-height 
values.</para></listitem><listitem><para>CSS defines the additional generic 
font families 'cursive' and 'fantasy' , as well as "system font" names 
'caption', 'icon', 'menu', 'message-box', 'small-caption', and 'status-bar'. 
(Generic family name definitions, below, let the application or library 
developer define these system names.)</para></listitem><listitem><para>CSS 
allows multiword font names to be quoted, e.g. "Times New Roman" (where the 
quotes are part of the value). LZX does not allow 
this.</para></listitem></itemizedlist>
@@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@
 </para>
 <para/></section><section><title condition="swf">Performance 
considerations</title>
 <para>
-Embedded fonts (in applications compiled to SWF) increase the size the size of 
the application.
+Embedded fonts (in applications compiled to SWF) increase the size of the 
application.
 </para>
 <para>When deciding what embedded fonts to use, you may need to take into 
account how
 fonts affect the size, hence download time, of your application. Here are some 
heuristics to help you

Modified: openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/programs/text-$6.lzx
===================================================================
--- openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/programs/text-$6.lzx   2007-09-26 
08:55:39 UTC (rev 6607)
+++ openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/programs/text-$6.lzx   2007-09-26 
09:38:21 UTC (rev 6608)
@@ -3,7 +3,8 @@
   <simplelayout/>
   <slider name="down" width="100" value="5000" minvalue="1000" 
maxvalue="100000"
 keystep="1000"/>
-  <text text="${'Slider Value is '+parent.down.value+' nicely constrained'}"/>
+<!-- added resize attribute IORIO 21 sep 2007                               -->
+  <text resize="false" text="${'Slider Value is '+parent.down.value+' nicely 
constrained'}"/>
 </canvas>
 <!-- * X_LZ_COPYRIGHT_BEGIN ***************************************************
 * Copyright 2007 Laszlo Systems, Inc.  All Rights Reserved.                   *

Modified: openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/proxied.dbk
===================================================================
--- openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/proxied.dbk    2007-09-26 08:55:39 UTC 
(rev 6607)
+++ openlaszlo/trunk/docs/src/developers/proxied.dbk    2007-09-26 09:38:21 UTC 
(rev 6608)
@@ -669,58 +669,60 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-You can run the YouTube player here:
+You can run the YouTube player <ulink 
url="http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.lzx?lzt=swf";>here</ulink>.
 </para>
 
-<para>
-http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.lzx?lzt=swf
-</para>
 
+
+
+
 <para>
 This is the youtubeplayer component source, and its supporting lzx files:
 </para>
 
 <para>
-http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtubeplayer.lzx?lzt=source
-http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.lzx?lzt=source
-http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/videolibraryicon.lzx?lzt=source
-http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/videolibrarypopup.lzx?lzt=source
-</para>
+    <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem><para><ulink 
url="http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtubeplayer.lzx?lzt=source";>youtubeplayer</ulink></para></listitem>
+                <listitem><para><ulink 
url="http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.lzx?lzt=source";>youtube</ulink></para></listitem>
+                <listitem><para><ulink 
url="http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/videolibraryicon.lzx?lzt=source";>videolibraryicon</ulink></para></listitem>
+                <listitem><para><ulink 
url="http://www.donhopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/videolibrarypopup.lzx?lzt=source";>videolibrarypopup</ulink></para></listitem>
+  </itemizedlist>
 
-<para>
-Here's the source of the YouTube proxy in Java, as a JSP. We've copied it to 
another file and added the .txt extension so you can look at the source instead 
of executing it. 
+
+
+
 </para>
 
 <para>
-http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp.txt
+Here's the <ulink 
url="http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp.txt";>source</ulink>
 of the YouTube proxy in Java, as a JSP. We've copied it to another file and 
added the .txt extension so you can look at the source instead of executing it. 
 </para>
 
+
 <para>
 It performs a ReST call on the YouTube API to perform searches (which only 
returns the id of the video and the URL of the HTML web page the view the 
video, but not the actual url of the FLV video file). When the user plays the 
video, it performs another call to download the web pages of the video, and 
scrape out the URL of the FLV file from each one. 
 </para>
 
 <para>
 The youtube proxy supports the following functions:
-</para>
 
-<para>
-videoGetFlvUrl(id)
-http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videoGetFlvUrl&amp;id=SRCux7wefH0
-</para>
+<itemizedlist>
+<listitem><para>
+<ulink 
url="http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videoGetFlvUrl&amp;id=SRCux7wefH0";>videoGetFlvUrl(id)</ulink>
+</para></listitem>
 
-<para>
-videosListFeatured()
-http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videosListFeatured
-</para>
 
-<para>
-videosListByTag(tag) // comma separated tags
-http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videosListByTag&amp;tag=kitten,cute
-</para>
+<listitem><para>
+<ulink 
url="http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videosListFeatured";>videosListFeatured()</ulink>
+</para></listitem>
 
-<para>
-videosListByUser(user)
-http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videosListByUser&amp;user=marccanter
+<listitem><para>
+<ulink 
url="http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videosListByTag&amp;tag=kitten,cute";>videosListByTag(tag)
 // comma separated tags</ulink>
+</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>
+<ulink 
url="http://www.DonHopkins.com/trunk/demos/youtube/youtube.jsp?method=videosListByUser&amp;user=marccanter";>videosListByUser(user)</ulink>
+</para></listitem>
+</itemizedlist>
 </para>
 <para/><section><title>Another example of SOLO deployment: LaszloMail</title>
 <para>


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