That looks good, especially the description of tone like "friendly and direct but not chummy or inappropriate".
I hope this can get some more before/after or good/bad examples along the lines of mpt's recent mail. Going off questionable examples might help us focus on the important bits. For instance there are some "(Read about uploading)" links which always seem a bit weird to me because most links cause Launchpad to do something, whereas clicking this one causes the user to do something. > English is a second or third language for most people using Launchpad Really "most"? (May well be true, certainly many.) Martin _______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~launchpad-dev Post to : launchpad-dev@lists.launchpad.net Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~launchpad-dev More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
