This looks good. Just some nitpicky stuff:

On the web service, getByName is a named operation (or "operation"), not a 
method. Calling it a method makes it look like a local method call.

'Our "bob" builder was retrieved using the no-priv user, and he does not..' The 
"he" is ambiguous. s/he/no-priv/.

Do you want to iterate over a *sorted* list of attribute names? 
bob.lp_attributes is ultimately dependent on the order of attributes in the 
IBuilder definition. Something to think about.

You might want to distinguish between cprov's launchpad and no-priv's in the 
variable names. 'launchpad' and 'cprov_launchpad' or 'privileged_launchpad'.

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Your team Launchpad code reviewers is requested to review the proposed merge of 
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