Guruprasad has proposed merging
~lgp171188/launchpad:fix-snaps-description-new-snap-page into launchpad:master.
Commit message:
Update the description for snaps in the new snap page
Use the description that is currently in https://snapcraft.io/docs.
LP: #2037033
Requested reviews:
Launchpad code reviewers (launchpad-reviewers)
Related bugs:
Bug #2037033 in Launchpad itself: "The +new-snap text does mention snappy and
points to an invalid (404) URL for documentation"
https://bugs.launchpad.net/launchpad/+bug/2037033
For more details, see:
https://code.launchpad.net/~lgp171188/launchpad/+git/launchpad/+merge/451926
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Your team Launchpad code reviewers is requested to review the proposed merge of
~lgp171188/launchpad:fix-snaps-description-new-snap-page into launchpad:master.
diff --git a/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt b/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt
index 29e8f64..1f15132 100644
--- a/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt
+++ b/lib/lp/snappy/templates/snap-new.pt
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
<div metal:fill-slot="main">
<div>
<p>
- A snap package is a self-contained application that can be installed
- on <a href="https://developer.ubuntu.com/en/snappy/">snappy Ubuntu
- Core</a>. Launchpad can build snap packages using <a
+ Snaps are Linux app packages for desktop, cloud and IoT that are
+ simple to install, secure, cross-platform, and dependency-free.
+ Launchpad can build snap packages using <a
href="https://developer.ubuntu.com/en/snappy/snapcraft/">snapcraft</a>,
from any Git or Bazaar branch on Launchpad that has a
<tt>snap/snapcraft.yaml</tt>, <tt>build-aux/snap/snapcraft.yaml</tt>,
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