On 6/18/2010 08:29, Hans-Peter Diettrich wrote:
Joost van der Sluis schrieb:
Our company has launched the new www.lazarussupport.com website.
Please take a look and tell what you think about it.
Nice, but it deserves more careful(l) proofreading.
AFAIR the official name is "Free Pascal" and "Florian Klaempfl", not
sure about "usefull".
I also prefer "multi platform" over "cross platform", just to
distinguish between Delphi "X" (which only is a *Windows based*
cross-compiler) and the FPC/Lazarus tools, which run natively *on* a
multitude of platforms.
DoDi
Also, on page
http://www.lazarussupport.com/lazarus/Overview
abailable -> available
usefull -> useful all across the site please :)
(true, there are 2 LLs when you say usefully, but useful is with only one)
develpment -> development
"After all, the Free Pascal and Lazarus projects itself are completely
written in Freepascal"
itself -> themselves
"developers like to keep the control of the projects in the hands of the
developers only"
sounds odd and maybe a little funny :)
on page
http://www.lazarussupport.com/lazarus/Support
assitence -> assistance
on working hours -> during working hours (2 places)
"Included is also the maintenance support." -> Maintenance support is
also included.
I think someone else also mentioned 0.9.29 appearing on this page.
on page
http://www.lazarussupport.com/lazarus/GetLazarus
sometimes the links does not have the "Hand" mouse-over icon (I use
Firefox), thought clicking on them works.
on page
http://www.lazarussupport.com/lazarus/About
"And at the same time we want to help the development of these open
source projects moving forward by providing patches and help where we
can." -> At the same time we want to help the development of these open
source projects to move forward by providing patches and help where we can.
on page
http://www.lazarussupport.com/lazarus/Compiler?section2=Overview
"patches that are send by others" -> patches that are sent by others (or
submitted)
Unfortunately I ran out of time, so can not read more pages ATM. I will
try to check some more...
Of course, I'm also not a native English speaker... so please double
check. :)
AB
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