> The first 5 slides in the "What is Leo" slideshow are at:
> http://webpages.charter.net/edreamleo/slides/what-is-leo/slide-001.html

This is looking great!

I know it's early to make content comments when only the first 5 of 23
are complete, but while it's ripe in my mind: I find the arrow in
Slide 2 confusing. I spent a number of moments trying to figure out
what the log pane on the right had to do with "creating an outline".
It was only when reviewing the slides for the second time I realised
the purpose of the arrow was to focus attention (only) on the outline
pane. Perhaps ditch the arrow and make the outline pane "glow" and dim
the rest. (glow and dime can wait until later, ditching the arrow for
the moment would be sufficient I think).

-matt

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