Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-09 15:11:22 -0600 (Mon, 09 May 2005)
New Revision: 5278
Modified:
trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/chapter06.xml
trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/introduction.xml
trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebook.xml
trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebugzilla.xml
Log:
Chapter 6 wording improvements
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC (rev
5277)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml 2005-05-09 21:11:22 UTC (rev
5278)
@@ -30,6 +30,9 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>May 9, 2005 [matthew]</para>
<itemizedlist>
+ <listitem><para>chapter06: Minor wording improvements and remove mention
+ of FTP updates as this is handled by the FTP maintainers now.</para>
+ </listitem>
<listitem><para>chapter05/fixbug.xml and chapter05/enternewbugs.xml:
Minor wording improvements</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/chapter06.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/chapter06.xml 2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC (rev
5277)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/chapter06.xml 2005-05-09 21:11:22 UTC (rev
5278)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
href="introduction.xml"/>
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
href="updatebugzilla.xml"/>
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
href="updatebook.xml"/>
- <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"; href="updateftp.xml"/>
+<!-- <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
+href="updateftp.xml"/>-->
<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude";
href="renderchecklinks.xml"/>
</chapter>
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/introduction.xml 2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC
(rev 5277)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/introduction.xml 2005-05-09 21:11:22 UTC
(rev 5278)
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<?dbhtml filename="introduction.html"?>
- <para>Updating a package in the LFS-Book consists of three phases:</para>
+ <para>Updating a package in the LFS-Book consists of the following:</para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -16,13 +16,8 @@
version of a package.</para>
</listitem>
- <listitem><para>Updating the LFS FTP archive to this new package can be
- downloaded when it's added to the book. This includes creating a new
- lfs-packages tarball.</para>
+ <listitem><para>Updating the book to reflect the new version of the package
+ and lfs-packages tarballs.</para>
</listitem>
-
- <listitem><para>Updating the book to reflect the new version of package and
- lfs-packages tarballs.</para>
- </listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</sect1>
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebook.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebook.xml 2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC
(rev 5277)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebook.xml 2005-05-09 21:11:22 UTC
(rev 5278)
@@ -13,8 +13,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
- <listitem><para>Assign yourself to the bug for this new package (you'll
find
- it in Bug #30's Dependency Tree. See previous section).</para>
+ <listitem><para>Assign yourself to the bug for this new package.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>Download the package to belgarath in your home directory.
@@ -29,23 +28,26 @@
are used twice, in chapter 5 and in chapter 6.</para>
</listitem>
- <listitem><para>Update the installation instructions in the book if
+ <listitem><para>Update the installation instructions in the book, if
necessary.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>When the package compiles properly and the package works
too
(doesn't seg. fault or show other errors when trying to execute programs
- from it), then open the <filename>entities/packagename.ent</filename> in
+ from it), then open the <filename>entities/general.ent</filename> in
an editor.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>Find the <emphasis>package-version</emphasis> entity and
- update its value to the new version. Don't change the
- <emphasis>package-depversion</emphasis> and
- <emphasis>package-contentversion</emphasis> unless you re-checked the
- dependencies and contents of the new version.</para>
+ update its value to the new version.</para>
</listitem>
+ <listitem><para>Update the list of files installed by the new version
of the
+ package. This can be trivially gathered by using <command>find</command>
+ immediately prior to and immediately after installing the new version and
+ <command>diff</command>ing the output.</para>
+ </listitem>
+
<listitem><para>Run <userinput>ls -l package-version.tar.bz2</userinput> on
the file you have in your home directory on belgarath. Divide the
filesize by <emphasis>1024</emphasis> to get the number of Kilobytes.
@@ -53,8 +55,6 @@
<emphasis>package-size</emphasis> entity.</para>
</listitem>
- <listitem><para>Commit changes to CVS and continue immediately with the
next
- section which will update the LFS FTP archive.</para>
- </listitem>
+ <listitem><para>Commit your changes to the SVN
repository.</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</sect1>
Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebugzilla.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebugzilla.xml 2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC
(rev 5277)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter06/updatebugzilla.xml 2005-05-09 21:11:22 UTC
(rev 5278)
@@ -13,19 +13,14 @@
released, but at least announce it.
</para>
- <para>We have a special bug for packages updates, Bug #30. All package update
- bugs are individual bugs, but they are all linked to Bug 30. Bug 30 is the
- parent bug so to speak.
- </para>
-
<itemizedlist>
- <listitem><para>Go to Bug #30's Dependency Tree at <ulink
-
url="http://bugs.linuxfromscratch.org/showdependencytree.cgi?id=30"/></para>
</listitem>
+ <listitem><para>Go to Bugzilla's query page at <ulink
+ url="http://bugs.linuxfromscratch.org/query.cgi"/></para> </listitem>
- <listitem><para>Find the package that was just updated in this list and click
- on its link (the link text will be crossed out (ie: a line through it which
- means it's currently a fixed bug).</para>
+ <listitem><para>Type the name of the package into the summary field and
choose
+ all of the statuses to ensure that the package version tracking bug will be
+ found.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem><para>Update the <emphasis>Summary</emphasis> field to reflect the
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