On 15 Jun 2005, you wrote in lfs.book:

> http://bugs.linuxfromscratch.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1517
> 
>            Summary: Entering the Chroot env nitpick
>            Product: Linux From Scratch
>            Version: TESTING
>           Platform: All
>         OS/Version: Linux
>             Status: UNCONFIRMED
>           Severity: trivial
>           Priority: P5
>          Component: Book
>         AssignedTo: [email protected]
>         ReportedBy: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>          QAContact: [email protected]
> 
> 
> A minor grammatical note:
> 
> "It is important that all the commands throughout the remainder of this
> chapter and the following chapters be run from within the chroot
> environment."
> 
> It is my opinion that   s/be/are/  because in the situation above
> 'are' should be used as the plural present indicative to 'be'.
> 
> 
> 
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> 

That also haqs the side effect of putting the passage into passive voice. 
How about s/be/are to be/

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Steve Crosby
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