Author: matthew
Date: 2005-07-09 09:15:24 -0600 (Sat, 09 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 6462

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter09/whatnow.xml
Log:
Minor rewording

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter09/whatnow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter09/whatnow.xml    2005-07-09 10:08:22 UTC (rev 6461)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter09/whatnow.xml    2005-07-09 15:15:24 UTC (rev 6462)
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
 <listitem><para>Maintenance</para>
 
 <para>Bugs and security notices are reported regularly for all software.
-As an LFS system has been compiled from source, it is up to you to keep
-abreast of such reports.  There are several online resources that track
-such reports, some of which are shown below:</para>
+Since an LFS system is compiled from source, it is up to you to keep abreast of
+such reports.  There are several online resources that track such reports, some
+of which are shown below:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>Freshmeat.net (<ulink url="http://freshmeat.net/"/>)</para>
@@ -29,9 +29,10 @@
 <para>Freshmeat can notify you (via email) of new versions of packages 
installed on your system.</para>
 </listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>CERT (Computer Emergency Response Team)</para>
+<listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.cert.org/";>CERT</ulink> (Computer
+Emergency Response Team)</para>
 
-<para>CERT is a mailing list that publishes security alerts concerning various
+<para>CERT has a mailing list that publishes security alerts concerning various
 operating systems and applications.  Subscription information is available at
 <ulink url="http://www.us-cert.gov/cas/signup.html"/>.</para>
 </listitem>

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