Author: matthew Date: 2005-08-06 05:21:55 -0600 (Sat, 06 Aug 2005) New Revision: 6615
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml Log: Fix a couple of minor grammar issues (Chris Staub) Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml 2005-08-06 11:19:23 UTC (rev 6614) +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml 2005-08-06 11:21:55 UTC (rev 6615) @@ -35,8 +35,7 @@ <screen><userinput>./configure --libdir=/lib --enable-shared</userinput></screen> -<para>Remove the installation of the <command>groups</command> program, and its man page as -Coreutils provides a better version:</para> +<para>Remove the installation of the <command>groups</command> program and its man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para> <screen><userinput>sed -i 's/groups$(EXEEXT) //' src/Makefile sed -i '/groups/d' man/Makefile</userinput></screen> Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml 2005-08-06 11:19:23 UTC (rev 6614) +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml 2005-08-06 11:21:55 UTC (rev 6615) @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ <para>First, unpack both <filename>vim-&vim-version;.tar.bz2</filename> and (optionally) <filename>vim-&vim-version;-lang.tar.gz</filename> archives into the -same directory. Then, change the default locations of the +same directory. Then, change the default location of the <filename>vimrc</filename> configuration file to <filename class="directory">/etc</filename>:</para> -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
