http://bugs.linuxfromscratch.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1629
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Status|RESOLVED |REOPENED
Resolution|FIXED |
------- Additional Comments From [EMAIL PROTECTED] 2005-10-03 08:23 -------
Good point, Chris. Apologies for missing your original comment on this one.
I'd rather not use a vertical list for layout, simply for aesthetic reasons
(we'd end up with a single sentence paragraph following the list). So, I can
think of the following wordings to make the command line knowledge explicit:
"In particular, as an absolute minimum, the reader should already have the
ability to use the command line (shell) to copy or move files and directories,
list directory and file contents, and change the current directory."
"In particular, as an absolute minimum, the reader should already have the
ability to use the command line (shell) to perform the following operations:
copy or move files and directories; list directory and file contents; and change
the current directory."
I don't know if one is particularly more readable or grammatically correct than
the other, so your input is more than welcome.
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