Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2006-01-29 23:51:33 -0700 (Sun, 29 Jan 2006)
New Revision: 7317
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/appendixa/acronymlist.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/bash.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gettext.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/introduction.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/binutils.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/changingowner.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml
Log:
Various textual corrections. Thanks Chris Staub.
Modified: trunk/BOOK/appendixa/acronymlist.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/appendixa/acronymlist.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev
7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/appendixa/acronymlist.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev
7317)
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><emphasis role="bold">LSB</emphasis></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Linux Standards Base</para>
+ <para>Linux Standard Base</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev 7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev 7317)
@@ -43,6 +43,9 @@
<para>[jhuntwork] - Adjust binutils-pass1 so we don't need to hang
on to its
source directories. Also use 'gcc -dumpmachine' instead of the
MACHTYPE var.</para>
</listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[jhuntwork] - Various textual corrections. Thanks Chris Staub.
+ </listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/bash.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/bash.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev 7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/bash.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev 7317)
@@ -46,12 +46,12 @@
<screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/tools
--without-bash-malloc</userinput></screen>
<variablelist>
- <title>The meaning of the configure options:</title>
+ <title>The meaning of the configure option:</title>
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--without-bash-malloc</parameter></term>
<listitem>
- <para>This options turns off the use of Bash's memory allocation
+ <para>This option turns off the use of Bash's memory allocation
(<function>malloc</function>) function which is known to cause
segmentation faults. By turning this option off, Bash will use
the <function>malloc</function> functions from Glibc which are
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev 7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev 7317)
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
<screen><userinput>make bootstrap</userinput></screen>
<variablelist>
- <title>The meaning of the make parameters:</title>
+ <title>The meaning of the make parameter:</title>
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>bootstrap</parameter></term>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gettext.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gettext.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev 7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gettext.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev 7317)
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
./configure --prefix=/tools --disable-shared</userinput></screen>
<variablelist>
- <title>The meaning of the configure options:</title>
+ <title>The meaning of the configure option:</title>
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--disable-shared</parameter></term>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev 7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev 7317)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
--disable-perl-regexp</userinput></screen>
<variablelist>
- <title>The meaning of the configure options:</title>
+ <title>The meaning of the configure option:</title>
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--disable-perl-regexp</parameter></term>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/introduction.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev
7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/introduction.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev
7317)
@@ -52,10 +52,7 @@
<important>
<para>After installing each package, delete its source and build
directories,
unless specifically instructed otherwise. Deleting the sources prevents
- mis-configuration when the same package is reinstalled later. Only three
- of the packages need to retain the source and build directories in order
- for their contents to be used by later commands. Pay special attention to
- these reminders.</para>
+ mis-configuration when the same package is reinstalled later.</para>
</important>
<para>Check one last time that the <envar>LFS</envar> environment
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/binutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/binutils.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev 7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/binutils.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev 7317)
@@ -59,16 +59,25 @@
<screen><userinput>make tooldir=/usr</userinput></screen>
-<para>Normally, the tooldir (the directory where the executables will
ultimately
-be located) is set to <filename
-class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename>. For example, i686
-machines would expand that to <filename
-class="directory">/usr/i686-pc-linux-gnu</filename>. Because this is a custom
-system, this target-specific directory in <filename
-class="directory">/usr</filename> is not required. <filename
-class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename> would be used if
the
-system was used to cross-compile (for example, compiling a package on an Intel
-machine that generates code that can be executed on PowerPC machines).</para>
+ <variablelist>
+ <title>The meaning of the make parameter:</title>
+ <varlistentry>
+ <term><parameter>tooldir=/usr</parameter></term>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>Normally, the tooldir (the directory where the executables will
+ ultimately be located) is set to <filename
+ class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename>. For
+ example, i686 machines would expand that to <filename
+ class="directory">/usr/i686-pc-linux-gnu</filename>. Because this is
+ a custom system, this target-specific directory in <filename
+ class="directory">/usr</filename> is not required. <filename
+ class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename> would be
+ used if the system was used to cross-compile (for example, compiling a
+ package on an Intel machine that generates code that can be executed
+ on PowerPC machines).</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </varlistentry>
+ </variablelist>
<important><para>The test suite for Binutils in this section is
considered critical. Do not skip it under any
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/changingowner.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/changingowner.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev
7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/changingowner.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev
7317)
@@ -32,9 +32,8 @@
<para>The command uses <parameter>0:0</parameter> instead of
<parameter>root:root</parameter>, because <command>chown</command>
-is unable to resolve the name <quote>root</quote> until the password
-file has been created. This book assumes you ran this
-<command>chown</command> command.</para>
+is unable to resolve the name <quote>root</quote> until the
+<filename>passwd</filename> file has been created.</para>
</sect1>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev
7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev
7317)
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
experience any difficulties. However, it is easy to make a typo and
render the new system unusable, so before running the
<command>strip</command> command, it is a good idea to make a
-backup of the current situation.</para>
+backup of the LFS system in its current state.</para>
<para>Before performing the stripping, take special care to ensure that
none of the binaries that are about to be stripped are running. If
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml 2006-01-30 06:50:11 UTC (rev 7316)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml 2006-01-30 06:51:33 UTC (rev 7317)
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
</sect2>
<sect2 id="conf-vim" role="configuration"><title>Configuring Vim</title>
-<indexterm zone="conf-vim"><primary
sortas="e-/etc/vim">/etc/vim</primary></indexterm>
+<indexterm zone="conf-vim"><primary
sortas="e-/etc/vimrc">/etc/vimrc</primary></indexterm>
<para>By default, <command>vim</command> runs in vi-incompatible mode. This may
be new to users who have used other editors in the past. The
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