Archaic wrote:
On Thu, Apr 13, 2006 at 10:10:38PM -0500, Bruce Dubbs wrote:
I would recommend s/dozens/many/

That's fine. I'll sit on it for a day to see if anyone else chimes in.


I agree with Bruce. 'dozens' unnecessarily quantifies it. In fact, it might be a lot more than 'dozens' would imply to the average reader.

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