Author: bdubbs
Date: 2006-07-18 12:29:09 -0600 (Tue, 18 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 7684
Modified:
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/findutils.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/readline.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/sysklogd.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/udev.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml
branches/6.2/BOOK/general.ent
Log:
Text corrections thanks to Chris Staub
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -35,7 +35,18 @@
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
-->
+
<listitem>
+ <para>Date</para>
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>[bdubbs] - Several textual corrections. Thanks to
+ Chris Staub.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
<para>July 15, 2006</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev 7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev 7684)
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
<title>How to Build an LFS System</title>
<para>The LFS system will be built by using a previously installed
- Linux distribution (such as Debian, Mandrake, Red Hat, or SuSE). This
+ Linux distribution (such as Debian, Mandriva, Red Hat, or SuSE). This
existing Linux system (the host) will be used as a starting point to
provide necessary programs, including a compiler, linker, and shell,
to build the new system. Select the <quote>development</quote> option
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
> gcc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
<para>Apply the following patch to change the location of GCC's default
- dynamiclinker (typically <filename
+ dynamic linker (typically <filename
class="libraryfile">ld-linux.so.2</filename>):</para>
<screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-specs-patch;</userinput></screen>
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/findutils.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/findutils.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/findutils.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
<command>find</command>. As <filename class="directory">/usr</filename>
may not be available during the early stages of booting, this program
needs to be on the root partition. The <command>updatedb</command>
- script also needs to correct an explicit path.</para>
+ script also needs to be modified to correct an explicit path:</para>
<screen><userinput>mv -v /usr/bin/find /bin</userinput>
sed -i -e 's/find:=${BINDIR}/find:=\/bin/' /usr/bin/updatedb</screen>
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/readline.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/readline.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/readline.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
<para>Next, remove the <filename class="extension">.so</filename> files in
<filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and relink them into <filename
- class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>.</para>
+ class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>:</para>
<screen><userinput>rm -v /lib/lib{readline,history}.so
ln -sfv ../../lib/libreadline.so.5 /usr/lib/libreadline.so
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
</variablelist>
<para>Disable the installation of the <command>groups</command> program
- and its man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
+ and its man pages, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
<screen><userinput>sed -i 's/groups$(EXEEXT) //' src/Makefile
find man -name Makefile -exec sed -i '/groups/d' {} \;</userinput></screen>
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/sysklogd.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/sysklogd.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/sysklogd.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -36,13 +36,13 @@
<title>Installation of Sysklogd</title>
<para>The following patch fixes various issues, including a problem
building
- Sysklogd with Linux 2.6 series kernels</para>
+ Sysklogd with Linux 2.6 series kernels:</para>
<screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&sysklogd-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>
<para>The following patch makes sysklogd treat bytes in the 0x80--0x9f
range
literally in the messages being logged, instead of replacing them with
octal
- codes. Unpatched sysklogd would damage messages in the UTF-8
encoding.</para>
+ codes. Unpatched sysklogd would damage messages in the UTF-8
encoding:</para>
<screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&sysklogd-8bit-patch;</userinput></screen>
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/udev.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/udev.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter06/udev.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<title>Installation of Udev</title>
<para>The udev-config tarball contains LFS-specific files used to configure
- Udev.</para>
+ Udev. Unpack it into the Udev source directory:</para>
<screen><userinput>tar xf ../&udev-config;.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev
7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev
7684)
@@ -76,15 +76,6 @@
configuration menus and create the kernel configuration from
scratch.</para>
- <note>
- <para>NPTL requires the kernel to be compiled with GCC-3.x or later, in
- this case &gcc-version;. It is not recommended to compile the kernel with
- GCC-2.95.x, as this causes failures in the Glibc test suite. Normally,
- this wouldn't be mentioned as LFS doesn't build GCC-2.95.x.
Unfortunately,
- the kernel documentation is outdated and still claims GCC-2.95.3 is the
- recommended compiler.</para>
- </note>
-
<para>Compile the kernel image and modules:</para>
<screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
Modified: branches/6.2/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- branches/6.2/BOOK/general.ent 2006-07-17 20:30:39 UTC (rev 7683)
+++ branches/6.2/BOOK/general.ent 2006-07-18 18:29:09 UTC (rev 7684)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "6.2-pre1">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "July 16, 2006">
+<!ENTITY version "6.2-pre2">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "July 19, 2006">
<!ENTITY milestone "6.2">
<!ENTITY generic-version "6.2"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or
"x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
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