Author: dnicholson
Date: 2007-02-23 21:56:32 -0700 (Fri, 23 Feb 2007)
New Revision: 7935

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/autoconf.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
Log:
Patch from Chris Staub with various fixes


Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml  2007-02-24 04:49:34 UTC (rev 7934)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml  2007-02-24 04:56:32 UTC (rev 7935)
@@ -40,6 +40,11 @@
       <para>2007-02-23</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
+          <para>[dnicholson] - Applied a patch from Chris Staub to fix some
+          commands and text on the kernel file systems, E2fsprogs and
+          Autoconf pages.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
           <para>[dnicholson] - Dropped the -D switch from the Udev
           documentation install command since it is already created by
           udev-config. Reported by Chris Staub.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/autoconf.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/autoconf.xml   2007-02-24 04:49:34 UTC (rev 7934)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/autoconf.xml   2007-02-24 04:56:32 UTC (rev 7935)
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
     <para>To test the results, issue:
     <userinput>make check</userinput>.
-    This takes a long time, about 3 SBUs.  In addition, 2 test are skipped
+    This takes a long time, about 3 SBUs.  In addition, 6 tests are skipped
     that use Automake.  For full test coverage, Autoconf can be re-tested
     after Automake has been installed.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml  2007-02-24 04:49:34 UTC (rev 7934)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml  2007-02-24 04:56:32 UTC (rev 7935)
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
 
     <screen><userinput>sed -i -e 's@/bin/rm@/tools&amp;@' 
lib/blkid/test_probe.in</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>It is recommended that E2fsprogs be built in a subdirectory of
-    the source tree: </para>
+    <para>The E2fsprogs documentation recommends that the package be built in
+    a subdirectory of the source tree: </para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mkdir -v build
 cd build</userinput></screen>
@@ -106,11 +106,11 @@
     <xref linkend="space-mounting"/> for details on creating and enabling
     swap space.</para>
 
-    <para>Install the binaries and documentation:</para>
+    <para>Install the binaries, documentation, and shared libraries:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install the shared libraries:</para>
+    <para>Install the static libraries and headers:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make install-libs</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml     2007-02-24 04:49:34 UTC (rev 7934)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml     2007-02-24 04:56:32 UTC (rev 7935)
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
       create a mirror of a directory or mount point to some other location. Use
       the following command to achieve this:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>mount --bind /dev $LFS/dev</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>mount -v --bind /dev $LFS/dev</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent      2007-02-24 04:49:34 UTC (rev 7934)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent      2007-02-24 04:56:32 UTC (rev 7935)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070220">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "February 20, 2007">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070223">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "February 23, 2007">
 <!ENTITY milestone "6.3">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or 
"x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
 

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