Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2007-03-02 16:23:14 -0700 (Fri, 02 Mar 2007)
New Revision: 7953

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml
Log:
Warnings and important notices about a command that appear after instructions 
to run it are evil.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml  2007-02-28 15:22:16 UTC (rev 7952)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml  2007-03-02 23:23:14 UTC (rev 7953)
@@ -37,6 +37,16 @@
 -->
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>2007-03-1</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[jhuntwork] - Minor grammatical changes. Move some warnings and
+         notices to appear before affected commands.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>2007-02-25</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml  2007-02-28 15:22:16 UTC (rev 7952)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml  2007-03-02 23:23:14 UTC (rev 7953)
@@ -32,25 +32,25 @@
   <para>The next task is to point GCC to the new dynamic linker. This is done 
by
   dumping GCC's <quote>specs</quote> file to a location where GCC will look 
for it
   by default. A simple <command>sed</command> substitution then alters the
-  dynamic linker that GCC will use:</para>
+  dynamic linker that GCC will use.</para>
 
-<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow copy and paste -->
-<screen><userinput>gcc -dumpspecs | sed '[EMAIL 
PROTECTED]/lib/ld-linux.so.2@/tools&amp;@g' \
-  > `dirname $(gcc -print-libgcc-file-name)`/specs</userinput></screen>
+  <para>For the sake of accuracy, it is recommended to use a copy-and-paste
+  method when issuing the following command. Be sure to visually inspect the
+  specs file and verify that all occurrences of 
<quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>
+  have been replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
 
-  <para>It is recommended that the above command be copy-and-pasted in order to
-  ensure accuracy. Be sure to visually inspect the specs file in order to
-  verify that all occurrences of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> have been
-  replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
-
   <important>
     <para>If working on a platform where the name of the dynamic linker is
     something other than <filename 
class="libraryfile">ld-linux.so.2</filename>,
     replace <quote>ld-linux.so.2</quote> with the name of the platform's
-    dynamic linker in the above commands. Refer back to <xref
+    dynamic linker in the following commands. Refer back to <xref
     linkend="ch-tools-toolchaintechnotes" role=","/> if necessary.</para>
   </important>
 
+<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow copy and paste -->
+<screen><userinput>gcc -dumpspecs | sed '[EMAIL 
PROTECTED]/lib/ld-linux.so.2@/tools&amp;@g' \
+  > `dirname $(gcc -print-libgcc-file-name)`/specs</userinput></screen>
+
   <para>During the build process, GCC runs a script
   (<command>fixincludes</command>) that scans the system for header files
   that may need to be fixed (they might contain syntax errors, for example),

-- 
http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-book
FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/faq.html
Unsubscribe: See the above information page

Reply via email to