Author: dnicholson
Date: 2007-06-12 11:53:19 -0600 (Tue, 12 Jun 2007)
New Revision: 8160
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
Log:
Minor grammar cleanup
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2007-06-12 16:41:27 UTC (rev 8159)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2007-06-12 17:53:19 UTC (rev 8160)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
failing to boot or failing to detect some devices, like SATA hard
drives.</para>
- <para>The LFS LiveCD team is working to fix that issues, but they need your
+ <para>The LFS LiveCD team is working to fix these issues, but they need
your
help testing it, reporting found problems, and collaborating on the LiveCD
development.</para>
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