Author: bdubbs
Date: 2008-10-19 15:07:28 -0600 (Sun, 19 Oct 2008)
New Revision: 8680
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
Log:
Rewording
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2008-10-19 20:53:01 UTC (rev 8679)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2008-10-19 21:07:28 UTC (rev 8680)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<note>
<para>The LFS LiveCD might not work on newer hardware configurations,
- failing to boot or failing to detect some devices, some like SATA hard
+ failing to boot or failing to detect some devices such as some SATA hard
drives.</para>
</note>
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