Author: matthew
Date: 2009-03-12 15:09:00 -0600 (Thu, 12 Mar 2009)
New Revision: 8839
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/appendices/dependencies.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gawk.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/db.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/grep.xml
trunk/BOOK/chapter06/inetutils.xml
Log:
Various text updates/typo fixes from Chris Staub. Fixes #2367.
Modified: trunk/BOOK/appendices/dependencies.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/appendices/dependencies.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev
8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/appendices/dependencies.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev
8839)
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@
<segtitle>&testsuites;</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
- <seg>Not run. Requires TCL installed on the final system</seg>
+ <seg>Not run. Requires Tcl installed on the final system</seg>
</seglistitem>
</segmentedlist>
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
<segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
- <seg>Util-Linux</seg>
+ <seg>Util-linux-ng</seg>
</seglistitem>
</segmentedlist>
@@ -1063,7 +1063,7 @@
<seglistitem>
<seg>Bash, GRUB, Inetutils, Less, Procps, Psmisc, Readline, Texinfo,
- Util-Linux, and Vim</seg>
+ Util-linux-ng, and Vim</seg>
</seglistitem>
</segmentedlist>
@@ -1426,8 +1426,8 @@
</seglistitem>
</segmentedlist>
-<!-- Begin Util-Linux dependency info -->
- <bridgehead renderas="sect2" id="util-linux-dep">Util-Linux</bridgehead>
+<!-- Begin Util-linux-ng dependency info -->
+ <bridgehead renderas="sect2" id="util-linux-dep">Util-linux-ng</bridgehead>
<segmentedlist>
<segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
@@ -1505,7 +1505,7 @@
<segtitle>&before;</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
- <seg>File, Module-Init-Tools, Perl, and Util-Linux</seg>
+ <seg>File, Module-Init-Tools, Perl, and Util-linux-ng</seg>
</seglistitem>
</segmentedlist>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -41,6 +41,10 @@
<para>2009-03-12</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
+ <para>[matthew] - Fix a few typos. Thanks to Chris Staub for the
report and
+ patch. Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2367">#2367</ulink>.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
<para>[matthew] - Reword the explanation of the Expect tests in
Binutils'
instructions to clarify what the expected test output is. Thanks to
Chris
Staub for the report and patch. Fixes
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gawk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gawk.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gawk.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -53,9 +53,10 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>ac_cv_func_working_mktime=yes</parameter></term>
<listitem>
- <para>This parameter bypasses the search for mktime in configure
- and uses the version in glibc. This is necessary due to a change in
- gcc that has not been incorporated into this package yet.</para>
+ <para>This parameter bypasses the search for mktime in
+ <command>configure</command> and uses the version in glibc. This is
+ necessary due to a change in GCC that has not been incorporated into
+ this package yet.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -121,8 +121,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>The build requires support for forced unwind, but because it is
being cross compiled, it cannot auto detect it. Setting this variable
- on the command line explicitly tells the configure script that
support
- is available.</para>
+ on the command line explicitly tells the
+ <command>configure</command> script that support is available.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/grep.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--without-included-regex</parameter></term>
<listitem>
- <para>The configure check for glibc's regex library is broken when
- building against glibc-2.8. This switch forces the use of glibc's
- regex library.</para>
+ <para>The configure check for Glibc's regex library is broken when
+ building against Glibc-&glibc-version;. This switch forces the use
of
+ Glibc's regex library.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/db.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/db.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/db.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@
<screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen>
<para>It is not possible to test the package meaningfully, because
- that would involve building TCL bindings. TCL bindings cannot be
- built properly now because TCL is linked against Glibc in
+ that would involve building Tcl bindings. Tcl bindings cannot be
+ built properly now because Tcl is linked against Glibc in
<filename class="directory">/tools</filename>, not against Glibc in
<filename class="directory">/usr</filename>.</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -61,10 +61,10 @@
esac</userinput></screen>
<para>The <command>fixincludes</command> script is known to occasionally
- erroneously attempt to "fix" the system headers installed so
far. As
- the headers installed by GCC-&gcc-version; and Glibc-&glibc-version; are
known
- to not require fixing, issue the following command to prevent the
- <command>fixincludes</command> script from running:</para>
+ erroneously attempt to "fix" the system headers installed so far.
+ As the headers up to this point are known to not require fixing,
+ issue the following command to prevent the <command>fixincludes</command>
+ script from running:</para>
<screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i 's...@\./fixinc\...@-c true@'
gcc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
@@ -82,8 +82,8 @@
--enable-clocale=gnu --enable-languages=c,c++ \
--disable-multilib --disable-bootstrap</userinput></screen>
- <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequsites that
- are not available. See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to
+ <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequisites that
+ are not available. See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to
build all the GCC supported languages.</para>
<para>Compile the package:</para>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/grep.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/grep.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/grep.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><parameter>--without-included-regex</parameter></term>
<listitem>
- <para>The configure check for glibc's regex library is broken when
- building against glibc-2.8. This switch forces the use of glibc's
- regex library.</para>
+ <para>The configure check for Glibc's regex library is broken when
+ building against Glibc-&glibc-version;. This switch forces the use
+ of Glibc's regex library.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/inetutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/inetutils.xml 2009-03-12 21:06:41 UTC (rev 8838)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/inetutils.xml 2009-03-12 21:09:00 UTC (rev 8839)
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
- <para>All programs that come with Inetutils will not be installed.
+ <para>Not all programs that come with Inetutils will be installed.
However, the Inetutils build system will insist on installing all the
man pages anyway. The following patch will correct this
situation:</para>
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