Author: gerard
Date: 2009-05-24 00:42:28 -0600 (Sun, 24 May 2009)
New Revision: 8911

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
Log:
Minor textual edit to make the livecd versions explanation a bit more clearer.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml        2009-05-24 06:30:54 UTC (rev 8910)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml        2009-05-24 06:42:28 UTC (rev 8911)
@@ -24,7 +24,8 @@
   providing all the tools you need to successfully follow the instructions in
   this book. Unfortunately, development of the LiveCD has not progressed
   recently and it only contains older versions of the source packages and
-  patches (for those ISOs not labeled -nosrc or -min), and this book.  For more
+  patches (the versions not labeled <quote>-nosrc</quote> or
+  <quote>-min</quote>), and this book.  For more
   information about the LFS LiveCD or to download a copy, visit <ulink
   url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
 

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