#2461: Minor changes needed in Toolchain Technical Notes
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 Reporter:  ch...@…             |        Owner:  matt...@…                   
     Type:  task                |       Status:  reopened                    
 Priority:  normal              |    Milestone:  6.5                         
Component:  Book                |      Version:  SVN                         
 Severity:  normal              |   Resolution:                              
 Keywords:                      |  
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Changes (by bdu...@…):

  * status:  closed => reopened
  * resolution:  fixed =>


Comment:

 I still don't like the wording of the start of the 2nd paragraph:

 The overall goal of Chapter 5 is to provide a temporary environment that
 can be chrooted into, where

 I would prefer:

 The overall goal of Chapter 5  is to provide a temporary environment that
 will be the targeted chroot environment where ...

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