Author: matthew
Date: 2010-04-14 15:45:02 -0600 (Wed, 14 Apr 2010)
New Revision: 9244
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
Log:
Minor rewording.
Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
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--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2010-04-14 20:47:30 UTC (rev 9243)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml 2010-04-14 21:45:02 UTC (rev 9244)
@@ -23,10 +23,10 @@
commercial distribution. The LFS LiveCD works well as a host system,
providing all the tools you need to successfully follow the instructions in
this book. The LiveCD version is behind the current book, but is still useful
- as a host for building the current book. It is recommended you use the
- <quote>-nosrc</quote> or <quote>-min</quote> versions of the LiveCD with the
- current book's instructions. For more information about the LFS LiveCD or to
- download a copy, visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
+ as a host for building the current book. The <quote>-nosrc</quote> or
+ <quote>-min</quote> editions of the LiveCD are the most appropriate for
+ building a current LFS system. For more information about the LFS LiveCD or
+ to download a copy, visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
<note>
<para>The LFS LiveCD might not work on newer hardware configurations,
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