Author: matthew
Date: 2010-04-14 15:45:02 -0600 (Wed, 14 Apr 2010)
New Revision: 9244

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
Log:
Minor rewording.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml        2010-04-14 20:47:30 UTC (rev 9243)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml        2010-04-14 21:45:02 UTC (rev 9244)
@@ -23,10 +23,10 @@
   commercial distribution. The LFS LiveCD works well as a host system,
   providing all the tools you need to successfully follow the instructions in
   this book. The LiveCD version is behind the current book, but is still useful
-  as a host for building the current book.  It is recommended you use the
-  <quote>-nosrc</quote> or <quote>-min</quote> versions of the LiveCD with the
-  current book's instructions.  For more information about the LFS LiveCD or to
-  download a copy, visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
+  as a host for building the current book.  The <quote>-nosrc</quote> or
+  <quote>-min</quote> editions of the LiveCD are the most appropriate for
+  building a current LFS system.  For more information about the LFS LiveCD or
+  to download a copy, visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
 
   <note>
     <para>The LFS LiveCD might not work on newer hardware configurations,

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