Author: bdubbs
Date: Mon Nov 18 15:44:37 2013
New Revision: 10374

Log:
Minor editorial changes

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/groff.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml      Tue Nov  5 00:33:25 2013        (r10373)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/glibc.xml      Mon Nov 18 15:44:37 2013        (r10374)
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     and install if they are not:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">if [ ! -r /usr/include/rpc/types.h ]; then
-  su -c 'mkdir -p /usr/include/rpc'
+  su -c 'mkdir -pv /usr/include/rpc'
   su -c 'cp -v sunrpc/rpc/*.h /usr/include/rpc'
 fi</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/groff.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/groff.xml      Tue Nov  5 00:33:25 2013        (r10373)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/groff.xml      Mon Nov 18 15:44:37 2013        (r10374)
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 
     <para>Install the package:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="install">mkdir -p /usr/share/doc/groff-1.22/pdf
+<screen><userinput remap="install">mkdir -pv /usr/share/doc/groff-1.22/pdf
 make install</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Some documentation programs, such as <command>xman</command>,

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml     Tue Nov  5 00:33:25 2013        (r10373)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/kernfs.xml     Mon Nov 18 15:44:37 2013        (r10374)
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
     <para>Begin by creating directories onto which the file systems will be
     mounted:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>mkdir -v $LFS/{dev,proc,sys}</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>mkdir -pv $LFS/{dev,proc,sys}</userinput></screen>
 
   <sect2>
     <title>Creating Initial Device Nodes</title>
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>if [ -h $LFS/dev/shm ]; then
   link=$(readlink $LFS/dev/shm)
-  mkdir -p $LFS/$link
+  mkdir -pv $LFS/$link
   mount -vt tmpfs shm $LFS/$link
   unset link
 else

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml    Tue Nov  5 00:33:25 2013        (r10373)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml    Mon Nov 18 15:44:37 2013        (r10374)
@@ -141,7 +141,11 @@
   deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some
   packages.</para>
 
-  <para id="version-check">To see whether your host system has all the 
appropriate versions, and
+  <!-- Use an empty sect2 element to prevent a pdf warning.  -->
+  <sect2 id="version-check">
+  <title> </title>
+
+  <para >To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, and
   the ability to compile programs, run the following:</para>
 
 <!-- ANY additional lines in the script cause a pdf rendering problem-->
@@ -191,4 +195,5 @@
 
 bash version-check.sh</userinput></screen>
 
+</sect2>
 </sect1>
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