Author: bdubbs
Date: Fri Jun 12 15:03:30 2020
New Revision: 11931
Log:
Finish review/update to cross2 book
Modified:
branches/cross2/chapter10/grub.xml
branches/cross2/chapter10/introduction.xml
branches/cross2/chapter11/reboot.xml
branches/cross2/chapter11/theend.xml
branches/cross2/chapter11/whatnow.xml
Modified: branches/cross2/chapter10/grub.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/cross2/chapter10/grub.xml Fri Jun 12 14:30:19 2020 (r11930)
+++ branches/cross2/chapter10/grub.xml Fri Jun 12 15:03:30 2020 (r11931)
@@ -20,12 +20,11 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<warning><para>Configuring GRUB incorrectly can render your system
- inoperable without an alternate boot device such as a CD-ROM. This
- section is not required to boot your LFS system. You may just
- want to modify your current boot loader, e.g. Grub-Legacy, GRUB2, or
+ inoperable without an alternate boot device such as a CD-ROM or bootable
+ USB drive. This section is not required to boot your LFS system. You may
+ just want to modify your current boot loader, e.g. Grub-Legacy, GRUB2, or
LILO.</para></warning>
-
<para> Ensure that an emergency boot disk is ready to <quote>rescue</quote>
the computer if the computer becomes unusable (un-bootable). If you do not
already have a boot device, you can create one. In order for the procedure
@@ -83,7 +82,7 @@
<para>The location of the boot partition is a choice of the user that
affects the configuration. One recommendation is to have a separate small
- (suggested size is 100 MB) partition just for boot information. That way
+ (suggested size is 200 MB) partition just for boot information. That way
each build, whether LFS or some commercial distro, can access the same boot
files and access can be made from any booted system. If you choose to do
this, you will need to mount the separate partition, move all files in the
Modified: branches/cross2/chapter10/introduction.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/cross2/chapter10/introduction.xml Fri Jun 12 14:30:19 2020
(r11930)
+++ branches/cross2/chapter10/introduction.xml Fri Jun 12 15:03:30 2020
(r11931)
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>It is time to make the LFS system bootable. This chapter
- discusses creating an <filename>fstab</filename> file, building a
+ discusses creating the <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file, building a
kernel for the new LFS system, and installing the GRUB boot loader so
that the LFS system can be selected for booting at startup.</para>
Modified: branches/cross2/chapter11/reboot.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/cross2/chapter11/reboot.xml Fri Jun 12 14:30:19 2020
(r11930)
+++ branches/cross2/chapter11/reboot.xml Fri Jun 12 15:03:30 2020
(r11931)
@@ -89,10 +89,6 @@
umount -v $LFS/proc
umount -v $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>
- <para>Unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
-
-<screen><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
-
<para>If multiple partitions were created, unmount the other
partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
@@ -100,6 +96,10 @@
umount -v $LFS/home
umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
+ <para>Unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
+
+<screen><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
+
<para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
<screen role="nodump"><userinput>shutdown -r now</userinput></screen>
Modified: branches/cross2/chapter11/theend.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/cross2/chapter11/theend.xml Fri Jun 12 14:30:19 2020
(r11930)
+++ branches/cross2/chapter11/theend.xml Fri Jun 12 15:03:30 2020
(r11931)
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<screen revision="systemd"><userinput>echo &versiond; >
/etc/lfs-release</userinput></screen>
<para>Two files describing the installed system may be used by packages
- that will be installed on the system, either in binary form or by building
+ that can be installed on the system later, either in binary form or by
building
them.</para>
<para>The first one shows the status of your
Modified: branches/cross2/chapter11/whatnow.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/cross2/chapter11/whatnow.xml Fri Jun 12 14:30:19 2020
(r11930)
+++ branches/cross2/chapter11/whatnow.xml Fri Jun 12 15:03:30 2020
(r11931)
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
<para>The Beyond Linux From Scratch book covers installation
procedures for a wide range of software beyond the scope of the LFS
- Book. The BLFS project is located at <ulink url="&blfs-root;"/>.</para>
+ Book. The BLFS project is located at <ulink url="&blfs-book;"/>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
<para>The LFS Hints are a collection of educational documents
submitted by volunteers in the LFS community. The hints are available
- at <ulink url="&hints-index;"/>.</para>
+ at <ulink url="&hints-root;"/>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
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