Author: pierre
Date: Thu Jun 18 00:14:06 2020
New Revision: 11953

Log:
Some finishing (?) touch in chapter
7

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter07/chapter07.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter07/stripping.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/chapter07.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/chapter07.xml  Wed Jun 17 21:22:40 2020        (r11952)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/chapter07.xml  Thu Jun 18 00:14:06 2020        (r11953)
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   <?dbhtml dir="chapter07"?>
   <?dbhtml filename="chapter07.html"?>
 
-  <title>Entering Chroot and Building Additional Tools</title>
+  <title>Entering Chroot and Building Additional Temporary Tools</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; 
href="introduction.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; 
href="changingowner.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/stripping.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/stripping.xml  Wed Jun 17 21:22:40 2020        (r11952)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/stripping.xml  Thu Jun 18 00:14:06 2020        (r11953)
@@ -8,13 +8,16 @@
 <sect1 id="ch-tools-stripping">
   <?dbhtml filename="stripping.html"?>
 
-  <title>Finishing Temporary Tools</title>
+  <title>Cleaning up and Saving the Temporary System</title>
   
-  <para>
-    The steps in this section are optional. Skip this section entirely
-    if you are not really short on disk space and do not want to create
-    a backup of the temporary tools.
-  </para>
+  <note><para>
+    All the steps in this section are optional. Nevertheless, as soon
+    as you begin installing packages in <xref
+    linkend="chapter-building-system"/>, the temporary tools will be
+    overwritten. So it may be a good idea to do a backup of the temporary
+    tools as described below. The other steps are only needed if you are
+    really short on disk space.
+  </para></note>
 
   <para>
     The following steps are performed from outside the chroot
@@ -115,7 +118,7 @@
       built packages, your temporary tools are in a good state and might be
       backed up for later reuse. In case of fatal failures in the subsequent
       chapters, it often turns out that removing everything and starting over
-      (more carefully) is the best option to recover. Unfortunatly, all the
+      (more carefully) is the best option to recover. Unfortunately, all the
       temporary tools will be removed, too. To avoid spending extra time to
       redo something which has been built successfully, prepare a backup.
     </para>
@@ -175,7 +178,7 @@
     <important>
       <para>
         If you left the chroot environment either to strip off debug
-        symbols, create a backup or restart building using a restore, 
+        symbols, create a backup, or restart building using a restore, 
         remember to mount the kernel virtual filesystems now again as 
         described in <xref linkend='ch-tools-kernfs'/> and re-enter
         the chroot environment (see <xref linkend='ch-tools-chroot'/>)

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
==============================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent      Wed Jun 17 21:22:40 2020        (r11952)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent      Thu Jun 18 00:14:06 2020        (r11953)
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
-<!ENTITY version         "SVN-20200617">
+<!ENTITY version         "SVN-20200618">
 <!ENTITY short-version   "svn">  <!-- Used below in &blfs-book; 
                                       Change to x.y for release but not -rc 
releases -->
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development"  or 
"x.y[-pre{x}]" -->
 
-<!ENTITY versiond        "20200617-systemd">
+<!ENTITY versiond        "20200618-systemd">
 <!ENTITY short-versiond  "systemd">
-<!ENTITY generic-versiond "20200615-systemd"> 
+<!ENTITY generic-versiond "systemd"> 
 
-<!ENTITY releasedate     "June 17th, 2020">
+<!ENTITY releasedate     "June 18th, 2020">
 
 <!ENTITY copyrightdate   "1999-2020"><!-- jhalfs needs a literal dash, not 
&ndash; -->
 
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