In Linux From Scratch, Version 6.1-pre2, Table of Contents, Preface,
Host System Requirements located at:

http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/view/6.1-pre2/prologue/hostreqs.html

I found the following errors:

In the first paragraph the word "First" is used and is followed by
"Secondly."  "Second" is sufficient.

Also in the second large paragraph:

"This second option can also been seen..." should be: "This second
option can also be seen..."

Additionally, in the same paragraph:

"If this second requirement is too steep..." needs a "," after steep.

Thank you.

sash

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