I hope this isn't too nit picky: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/view/6.1-pre2/prologue/typography.html
1. "This form of text is used for several purposes in the book, mainly to emphasize important points or items." Should not be a comma splice and should instead be: "This form of text is used for several purposes in the book. Its main purpose is to emphasize important points or items." Also: 2. "This format is used for hyperlinks, both within the LFS community and to external pages, including HOWTOs, download locations, and websites." Should be: "This format is used for hyperlinks both within the LFS community and to external pages. It includes HOWTOs, download locations, and websites." And: 3. "This format is used when creating configuration files. The first command tells the system to create the file $LFS/etc/group from whatever is typed on the following lines until the sequence end of file (EOF) is encountered. Therefore, this entire section is generally typed as seen." "This format is used when we create configuration files..." Then there is: 4. "This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed as seen or copy-and-pasted." "...copied-and-pasted." Another change might be: 5. "...man 5 passwd in order to read the specific page being referred to." "...man 5 passwd in order to read the specific page being referred to in the book." :) sash -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/ Unsubscribe: See the above information page
