On Sun, Sep 11, 2005 at 04:09:06PM -1000, Erik Glyttov wrote: > Found two "issues" while recently (re)reading through LFS 6.1: > > In the Preface, the Structure section includes "making a partition" > under Part II - Preparing for the Build. However, looking at the Table > of Contents, "Preparing a New Partition" currently (and mistakenly?) > falls under Part I - Introduction.
Ahh, very good eye! This leaves me wondering. It would seem more logical to move it to Part 2, but that also makes for a vrey small Part I. > In section 1.1, How to Build an LFS System, the following sounds (at > least to my ears) grammatically odd: "While this may initially seem like > a lot of work to isolate the new system from the host distribution, a > full technical explanation is provided at the beginning of Chapter 5." > I'd suggest something along the lines of "This may initially seem like a > lot of work to isolate the new system from the host distribution; a full > technical explanation is provided at the beginning of Chapter 5." The first clause begins a long prepositional phrase. The comma is correct. However, other wording considerations are welcome. -- Archaic Want control, education, and security from your operating system? Hardened Linux From Scratch http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/hlfs -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/lfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/ Unsubscribe: See the above information page
