The excellent page 7.4 on "Device and Module Handling on an LFS System"
has a  minor wording difficulty for me.  In 7.4.4 the
sentence "A kernel driver may not export its data to sysfs." means that
a kernel driver is not allowed, by some unspecified rules, to export its
data to sysfs.  What I think you mean is "A kernel driver might not
export its data to sysfs." - subtle, but important.  It's only recently
that our general language laxity has let this kind of malapropism in.

I'm also not keen on "Once the above stage is complete..." in 7.4.2.
"Once the stage described above is complete..." is much better, or even
"After this stage is complete..." if brevity is desired.

R.

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