1. The "Configuring for Adding Users" page mentions creating
/etc/default/useradd, but this is already created by the version of
Shadow in current LFS.
2. In the vimrc page, it says "Note that this is only true if you
compiled vim using LFS-3.1 onwards. Prior to this, the global vimrc was
/usr/share/vim/vimrc." Isn't a comment about LFS 3.1 a bit old to be
mentioned in current BLFS?
3. There a few broken links in the "Setting Up a Network Firewall" page.
This includes both links to ibm.com, the link to linuxgazette (I think
the link to that issue should be http://www.linuxjournal.com/issue/65/
but I don't know which article...assuming it's even there, since
linuxgazette.com now redirects to linuxjournal.com) and the link to
http://www.linux-firewall-tools.com/linux/.
I've also attached a patch to address several other issues, in addition
to some spelling/grammar fixes...
1. ZSH instructions say to unpack the docs tarball into the source dir,
but it should have the command to untar the docs from inside the ZSH
source dir, for consistency with other packages in the book.
2. GnuCash says libgnomeui and GtkHTML are required, but GtkHTML already
needs libgnomeui.
3. GNOME Media says it requires Scrollkeeper and XML::Parser.
Scrollkeeper requires XML::Parser, so this is redundant.
4. libgnomeprint says it requires Pango and Fontconfig, but Pango
requires Fontconfig already.
5. Updated program lists for kdelibs, kdebase, and libgsf.
6. Updated the explanation for the sed command in pciutils to take into
account that it now looks for curl.
Index: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/acknowledgments.xml (working copy)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para><ulink url="mailto:highos@&lfs-domainname;";>Jesse
- Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <higho <at> @&lfs-domainname;> for
+ Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> <higho <at> &lfs-domainname;> for
answering many questions on IRC, having a great deal of patience and for
not killing the former editor for the joke in the original BLFS
announcement!</para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml (working copy)
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>If you are having a problem compiling the package, try
searching the LFS archives at
- <ulink url="http://search.&lfs-domainname;/"/> for the error or if
+ <ulink url="http://www.&lfs-domainname;/search.html"/> for the error or
if
that fails, try searching Google. If everything else fails,
try the blfs-support mailing-list.</para>
</listitem>
Index: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/config/bootdisk.xml (working copy)
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
<para>This section is really about creating a <emphasis>rescue</emphasis>
device. As the name <emphasis>rescue</emphasis> implies, the host
system has a problem, often lost partition information or corrupted file
- systems, that prevent it from booting and/or operating normally. For
+ systems, that prevents it from booting and/or operating normally. For
this reason, you <emphasis>must not</emphasis> depend on resources from
the host being "rescued". To presume that any given partition or hard
drive <emphasis>will</emphasis> be available is a risky presumption.</para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/editors/vim.xml (working copy)
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
<title>Configuration Information</title>
<para><application>Vim-7.0</application> introduced an
- integrated spell checker that doesn't requires additional libraries to be
+ integrated spell checker that doesn't require additional libraries to be
installed. To enable the spell checker you can set the following in
one of the configuration files: </para>
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
from: <ulink url="ftp://ftp.vim.org/pub/vim/runtime/spell/"/> and save
them to <filename class="directory"> ~/.vim/spell </filename> or in
<filename class="directory">
- /usr/share/vim/vim70/spell/</filename>.</para>
+ /usr/share/vim/vim71/spell/</filename>.</para>
<para>For more information about the spell checker and some other
features in <application>Vim-&vim-version;</application> (such us
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
<para>A list of the reinstalled files, along with their short
descriptions can be found in the <ulink
url="&lfs-root;/chapter06/vim.html#contents-vim">LFS Vim Installation
- Instrutions</ulink></para>
+ Instructions</ulink></para>
<segmentedlist>
<segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
Index: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/shells/zsh.xml (working copy)
@@ -93,11 +93,11 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>Installation of ZSH</title>
- <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it the same
- way you would the source tarball. The documentation will unpack into
- the <filename class='directory'>Doc</filename> directory of the source
- tree.</para>
+ <para>If you downloaded the optional documentation, unpack it with
+ the following command:</para>
+<screen><userinput>tar --strip-components=1 -xvf
../zsh-&zsh-version;-doc.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>
+
<para>Install <application>ZSH</application> by running the following
commands:</para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/gnucash.xml (working copy)
@@ -76,7 +76,6 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
<para role="required"><xref linkend="guile"/>,
<xref linkend="slib"/>,
- <xref linkend="libgnomeui"/>,
<xref linkend="goffice"/>, and
<xref linkend="gtkhtml"/></para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/add/kdeutils.xml (working copy)
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@
<segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
- <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
- kgpg, khexedit, kjots, kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager,
- and superkaramba</seg>
+ <seg>ark, irkick, kcalc, kcharselect, kdessh, kdf, kedit, kfloppy,
+ kgpg, khexedit, kjots, klaptop_acpi_helper, klaptop_check,
+ kregexpeditor, ktimer, kwalletmanager, kwikdisk, and superkaramba</seg>
<seg>Several kdeutils specific libraries</seg>
<seg>Several subdirectories in $KDE_PREFIX/share</seg>
</seglistitem>
Index: trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdelibs.xml (working copy)
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
ksendbugmail, kshell, kstartupconfig, ksvgtopng, ktelnetservice,
ktradertest, kunittestmodrunner, kwrapper, lnusertemp,
make_driver_db_cups, make_driver_db_lpr, makekdewidgets, meinproc,
- and preparetips</seg>
+ preparetips, and start_kdeinit</seg>
<seg>Numerous <application>KDE</application> libraries and helper
modules</seg>
<seg>/etc/kde and the following subdirectories of &kde-dir;/:
Index: trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/kde/core/kdebase.xml (working copy)
@@ -169,13 +169,13 @@
<seglistitem>
<seg>appletproxy, drkonqi, extensionproxy, genkdmconf, kaccess,
kappfinder, kapplymousetheme, kasbar, kate, kblankscrn.kss,
- kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcontrol,
- kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject, kdeinstallktheme,
+ kbookmarkmerger, kcheckpass, kcheckrunning, kcminit, kcminit_startup,
+ kcontrol, kcontroledit, kdcop, kdebugdialog, kdeeject,
kdeinstallktheme,
kdepasswd, kdeprintfax, kdesktop, kdesktop_lock, kdesu, kdesud,
kdialog,
kdm, kdm_config, kdm_greet, kdmctl, keditbookmarks, keditfiletype,
kfind, kfmclient, kfontinst, kfontview, khc_docbookdig.pl,
khc_htdig.pl,
khc_htsearch.pl, khc_indexbuilder, khc_mansearch.pl, khelpcenter,
- khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter, kio_media_mounthelper,
+ khotkeys, kicker, kinfocenter (link to kcontrol),
kio_media_mounthelper,
kio_system_documenthelper, kjobviewer, klipper,
klocaldomainurifilterhelper, kmenuedit, knetattach, kompmgr, konqueror,
konsole, kpager, kpersonalizer, kpm, kprinter, krandom.kss, krandrtray,
Index: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/libgnomeprint.xml (working copy)
@@ -58,7 +58,6 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
<para role="required"><xref linkend="pango"/>,
<xref linkend="libart_lgpl"/>,
- <xref linkend="fontconfig"/>,
<xref linkend="popt"/>,
<xref linkend="libxml2"/>, and
<xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/></para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-media.xml (working copy)
@@ -57,8 +57,7 @@
<bridgehead renderas="sect3">GNOME Media Dependencies</bridgehead>
<bridgehead renderas="sect4">Required</bridgehead>
- <para role="required"><xref linkend="perl-xml-parser"/>,
- <xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
+ <para role="required"><xref linkend="scrollkeeper"/>,
<xref linkend="esound"/>, and
<xref linkend="libgnomeui"/></para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/add/gnome-audio.xml (working copy)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
<para>The <application>gnome-audio</application> package contains a set
of default sounds for the <application>GNOME</application> GUI desktop.
Sound files for startup, shutdown and many GTK+ events are included.
- These sounds compliment the <application>GNOME Media</application>
+ These sounds complement the <application>GNOME Media</application>
package.</para>
<bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>
Index: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x7server.xml (working copy)
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
</note>
<para>A <ulink url='http://wiki.x.org/wiki/Development/Security'>security
- vulnerability</ulink> have been identified in the xorg-server
+ vulnerability</ulink> has been identified in the xorg-server
package. Apply a patch to fix this vulnerability with the following
command:</para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/installing/x-config.xml (working copy)
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
these properly, you will notice a resolution much lower than desired.
The default <option>HorizSync</option> setting is 28-33kHz which is very
conservative. The default <option>VertRefresh</option> is 43-72Hz.
- Consult your monitor documentation or search on line for the proper
+ Consult your monitor documentation or search online for the proper
settings for your monitor.</para>
<para>It is also possible to control many detailed timing characteristics
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
or via a graphical interface such as <application>KDE</application>'s
Control Center.</para>
- <para>A typical monitor sections will normally look like:</para>
+ <para>A typical monitor section will normally look like:</para>
<screen><literal>Section "Monitor"
DisplaySize 400 300 # mm
Index: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/pciutils.xml (working copy)
@@ -91,9 +91,10 @@
<para><command>sed -i 's/null ;/null 2>\&1 ;/'
update-pciids.sh</command>: This command suppresses some unneeded screen
output from the <command>update-pciids</command> command if you don't have
- either <application>Lynx</application> or <application>Wget</application>
- installed by redirecting the stderr output of the embedded
- <command>which</command> command to <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
+ either <application>Lynx</application>, <application>Wget</application>,
+ or <application>Curl</application> installed by redirecting the stderr
+ output of the embedded <command>which</command> command to
+ <filename>/dev/null</filename>.</para>
</sect2>
Index: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml (revision 7111)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/libgsf.xml (working copy)
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
<segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
<seglistitem>
- <seg>gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional)</seg>
+ <seg>gsf, gsf-office-thumbnailer (optional), and gsf-vba-dump</seg>
<seg>libgsf-1.{so,a} and optionally, libgsf-gnome-1.{so,a}</seg>
<seg>/usr/include/libgsf-1 and /usr/share/gtk-doc/html/gsf</seg>
</seglistitem>
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