Ken Moffat wrote:
> First "*and*" - it's emphasised. Are you are using recent kde ?
> Gtk-webkit doesn't do emphasis (looking at epiphany-2.28), gecko does
> (italics in forefox-3.6.3plugin), lynx does (different colour). So, I'm
> reluctant to add '*' for emphasis in the text.
No, that's just for the email. I always use text only for email.
Docbook's <emphisis> is fine. The example is OK.
> I'm also reluctant to give a false impression that setting ABI is need on
> *any* architecture, it's only an i?86 thing. Yes, I know that we only
> support x86, but I still feel that unqualified statements can spread
> confusion. I'm willing to concede the point on this, if that is the
> consensus.
Then we need to say that it's i?86 only.
> Insetting the ABI=32 ./configure looks a lot nicer. I've put a revised
> version there for this - boxing ('userinput') seems to work, and insets
> the line, but the box is an extra line deep on my browsers. /me misses
> Manuel's advice.
There are a couple of style issues, but the content is looking pretty
good.
Style issues:
Blank line after 1st configure
Change '- you can search' to just 'Search'.
'to build for i486 use' Add 'an' before i486.
-- Bruce
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