Here are some errors I have found in the PFS 7.0 PDF:

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On page xvi:

"http://www.linuxhq.com/guides/LUG/guide.html";
is not a valid web address.
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On Page 3, there is an extraneous bullet.

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On page 21, under Iana-Etc:
the homepage link is invalid, but it should redirect.  I think it has changed 
to: 


freecode.com/projects/iana-etc


or alternatively, it looks like you could probably direct people to:  
http://sethwklein.net/iana-etc


also in that Download link, you have an extra slash in the address in between: 

conglomeration//iana-etc
 
(although clicking on the link itself works)

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On page 24, the udev "homepage" link is invalid.   Although this appears to be 
fixed in LFS 7.1

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Page 24

Util-linux

homepage is invalid

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Although there isn't really an error, 
On page 17, if the permissions are too restrictive, I think you need to clarify 
what to do about it.  You say to remount, but I the average person might not 
know what that means.  What I believe you intended was to issue the command:

mount -o remount,suid,dev /dev/sd_

which seemed to do the trick.
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