[lfs-dev] Proposition for the network systemd page

[Pierre Labastie]

Hi,

In order to use jhalfs with systemd, I'd like to propose a few changes 
to the systemd "General Network Configuration" page. Note that it 
shouldn't change the rendering of the page (apart from a typo fix), but 
it would allow to generate a script which would install a static network 
with static DNS. I attach a patch (generated with svn diff, so -p0).

Index: chapter07/networkd.xml
===================================================================
--- chapter07/networkd.xml	(révision 11200)
+++ chapter07/networkd.xml	(copie de travail)
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
       Static IP setup (using both systemd-networkd and
       systemd-resolved):</para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>cat &gt; /etc/systemd/network/10-eth0-static.network &lt;&lt; "EOF"
+<screen><userinput>cat &gt; /etc/systemd/network/10-eth0-static.network &lt;&lt; "EOF"
 <literal>[Match]
 Name=eth0
 
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
     from the ISP or network administrator, into
     <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename>.</para>
 
-    <sect3 id="resolv-conf-systemd-resoloved">
+    <sect3 id="resolv-conf-systemd-resolved">
       <title>systemd-resolved Configuration</title>
 
       <note><para>If using another means to configure your network
@@ -121,9 +121,9 @@
       <para>When using <command>systemd-resolved</command> for DNS
       configuration, it creates the file
       <filename>/run/systemd/resolve/resolv.conf</filename>. Create a
-      symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> to use the generatd file:</para>
+      symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> to use the generated file:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput remap="install">ln -sfv /run/systemd/resolve/resolv.conf /etc/resolv.conf</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>ln -sfv /run/systemd/resolve/resolv.conf /etc/resolv.conf</userinput></screen>
 
     </sect3>
 
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@
      is not going to be configured, create the <filename>/etc/hosts</filename>
      file by running the following command:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>cat &gt; /etc/hosts &lt;&lt; "EOF"
+<screen role="nodump"><userinput>cat &gt; /etc/hosts &lt;&lt; "EOF"
 <literal># Begin /etc/hosts
 
 127.0.0.1 <replaceable>&lt;HOSTNAME.example.org&gt;</replaceable> <replaceable>&lt;HOSTNAME&gt;</replaceable> localhost <replaceable>[alias1] [alias2] ...</replaceable>
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