On 02/17/2014 12:14 PM, Fernando de Oliveira wrote:
> 
> It is a very good work, would have saved me some days, perhaps months,
> as the first build, I gave up, in the past. Thanks.
> 
> Optional, for "VMware virtual machines": it could be interpreted
> incorrectly as optional for VM... I would think that to emphasize, it
> could be "Optional, but required for VMware virtual machines".
> 

There was a coma, and that doesn't make it the same as "Optional for
VMware virtual machines", but yes I agree there. I've corrected that to
be "Optional, required for ..." as in the USB part.

> "One of the USB controller drivers, hardware dependent. You can look in
> the "lsmod" output" - can all be used?
> 

Well, that really depends. I've corrected it to say "One or more", since
some hardware can use only one (ie USB 2.0 only hardware), while some
older hardware has both USB 2.0 and USB 1.1 and some newer hardware has
also USB 2.0 and USB 3.0.

> # while the others can be also select as "module": s/select/selected/?
> 

Yes, corrected.

Thanks for your input.

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